I'm blown away. The fate of the world resting on the shoulders of one exiled being that can only be given a small window of freedom once over many a year... Can't wait to see how it turns out. Only bit of "help" I can give is to break up the paragraphs. Looooooong pieces of text can be intimidating. Although, I have to say, you certainly have a way with words. It was very captivating. Kept me moving from word to word wanting to know more.
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