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These are the 3 best poems i wrote and, i really think its good please tell me what you think, i hope its good!


LOVE


Love is a blade
a blade for good
a blade for bad
it can heal the darkest of souls
if abused if can tear throught the raw heart of a mortal
but who am i but a man, to talk about love and romance
love is not a beast that can be tamed
nor a game a person can win
but let love be
a blade for good
and a blade for bad
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The Darkest Day that was Bright

The moonlight shining on my sleepy face
sunlight bright as my heart begins to race
hear, the bats cry
and sleepy, in the bed i lye
but put these together and tell me what you saw
what i saw was total chaos
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That WAR

Thoese people
those people killing each other like there's no tommrow
stabbing, punching, and kicking
my fellow brothers, what has turnes you against one another
that you murder each other as if it is not a sin
i have never even dreamt or heard of a war this bad
so much bodies
so much blood
as if this is the kill point of the human race
each and every person is fighting
fighting as if protecing their most prized possesion
the whole field is red
red grass, red dirt
and warm red blood
ladies and gentlemen
hell has layed its egg
and it hatched right here
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