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The story of Evil
one hell of a story you can bet on it
MYTHIC TALE BOOK1 REAPER
The past of Chaos

The Main characters.

reapers:

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name: Dark Alias
Age: Unknown
Weapon: Rod
Specialty: Magic
Special skill: She exists out of several different people which makes her a lot more stronger.

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Name: Dark Chaos
Age: Unknown
Weapon: Scythe
Specialty: Close combat
Special skill: The fact that you can't see his eyes doesn't mean that he doesn't have them he has Eyes of the shinigami as you call it^_^


as you can see they both are wearing a book the Difference between the books is*drums* the one that Alias carries with her also contains magic spells^_^

Other Characters

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Chaos in his period when he still was alive.

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the mother of Chaos

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Chaos his older sister

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Chaos his younger sister.

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and the father of Chaos.

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the king of warriors: Drakonan.
he uses the mysterious power of a fire core that was implanted in his body.

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the warriors inside the arena

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well...a sad idea i know but this is the undead...can have different clothes if you like to fantasize them so^_^be my guest

NOTICE: not all character might are looking they are supposed to so if its not a problem you can alsu use your fantasy thank you^_^


"Alias, its your task to keep and eye on Chaos..his past is making him hard to control'The supreme reaper said to Alias while chaos was still waiting in front of his office."ok, and for the mission today a lot of people went berserk and started to kill their friends family and a lot more your task is to investigate and eliminate any zombie/undead that you can find there take Chaos and be sure to babysit him well ,goodluck."After hearing those words Alias left the Office and told Chaos about the mission in town before they left.

While they were traveling she asks."Chaos?...what happend in your past that they want someone to watch over you. Were you an assision, a killer? please as your partner tell me.'Chaos looks at her with a strange look."Do you really want to know?..well...ok just you i'll show you the memories of me but don't tell it any further i'll carry your body while your mind is inside my memories of my past."She looks back at him as he lifts her up. Her eyes slowly close before she is inside his memories."Don't expect anything nice and don't do anything unnecasery please like trying to change something."He says as she slowly whirls into his mind.

She awakes inside a big town. The streets are overrun with people. She gets up as she hears a nice melody play. How long ago was it, years? age's? millenium's? Slowly she starts to walks through the crowd wondering what Chaos would like at the moment. Suddenly she stops and hears someone yelling. She carefully listens while running towards the voice."Chaos what kind of name is that you jerk! don't make me kill you, you, you b*****d!" She hears a voice that she recognizes a little bit and starts to run faster."You better be carefull what you say. Kill me? don't make me laugh i'll be the one killing you guy's." She arrives where the voices came from and notices that a group of people are standing around one person all wearing swords and the guy in the middle has his face covert but still she was charmed by his look." That must be Chaos."She says to herself and keeps watching what is about to happen. The guys start to attack Chaos one by one while he takes them out easily one by one."I told you that it would be me doing the killing."He says with a wicked grin as far as you could see his face. He puts his sword back into the sheet and walks through the crowd and leaves the town. Alias follows him with great curiousity.

He keeps walking for hours while Alias follows him."I guess his power already awakend when he was alive."She says to herself. He suddenly stops in a forrest and looks around."How long are you planning to follow me?...did you come take revenge for those men?" And her turns around right in the direction where Alias was standing. She gets scared thinking that he knows that she is there and tries to attack her.Behind her she hears someone walking towards her."Chaos do you have any idea what you are doing and that you got a special power?"She turns and sees another reaper."Oh yeah i do know that i got a power i can use your kind of magic i posses great power that no normal mortal can wield."He grins and starts to dash towards the reaper he flies right through Alias. Who gets pretty shocked cause Chaos bashed right through her without even thinking and attacks the reaper head on. The reaper didn't have a chance to defend himself. At the moment Alias turned around to see what happend. She saw the head of the reaper lying on the ground looks to where she was standing. She starts screaming but then realises that it already happend long ago.

Chaos starts walking again and she keeps following him. She ends up following him into a huge colosseum that he enters. He stands in the middle of the arena looking cool."You bunch of misserable people should die where i stand...so come and dare to take me on with your best men. and try to take my head." He says while still grinning leaving himself complete open for every attack. Suddenly the gates inside the arena open and huge numbers of warriors walk out."Damn weakling...but he at least i seem popular." He says as he grabs his blades."C'mon Drakonan at least fight me fair i want to make your power burn your entire city down!"He shouts towards the king of the Warriors."Attack him." He replies and all the warrioirs in the arena start to attack Chaos. He keeps swinging his sword and takes a sword from one of the warriors he killed slashing more and more. After hours of fighting the battle finaly came to an end. Alias couldn't believe her eyes he killed hundred's, no thousands of warriors and the only thing he had was one little scratch. Now she knows what was so special about him. He had the power of raising the limit of the human/dead. He could raise his strength with every person he kills.

"C'mon Drakonan!"He shouts."I'm waiting for your little fire." Drakonan starts to sweat a bit."Damn him he killed my entire army while getting only a single scratch." He grabs his swords and directly 2 big wings made of flames burst out of his back. He enters the arena."Let's see what you got then."He slowly starts to walk faster until he runs towards Chaos."Die b*****d!"He screams while running."You're on slow b*****d you know."Chaos says and closes his eyes."Don't you dare to underestimate me!"Drakonan screams and slashes with his sword over and over. The only damage he did was small burns marks on Choas his body. Chaos opens his eyes revealing 2 deep red eyes."Fear this you weakling."He instantly dissappears from the vission of Drakonan and dashes with his speed past Drakonan giving him small scratches over his body."Thats only the speed that i can attain...you better not start to think of how much damage i can bring to you weak little body." And he appears right behind Drakonan."C'mon hit me i'll give you a free hit!" He shouts teasing Drakonan. Drakonan turns in anger aiming for Chaos his throat and chest he only scratches the chest with a lighty cut wound."To bad your to slow."And Chaos slashes Drakonan in two pieces." Looks like he was no match after all." Chaos turns and sheets his sword again.

Slowly the core starts to awake that was inplanted to Drakonan's body.Chaos starts to smell in the air."Hmmm something smells like its gonna burn."He turns around and sees that the core went berserk."Oh....f*ck...."He tries to run out of the arena as fast as he can but the fire starts to catch up with him burning his back and the chains around his face start to glow red burning his face more and more."AAAAAAAAAAAAAAGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHH."He dissappears and appears miles further.When Alias arived at the place where Chaos was she saw him removing the red glowing chains that had his face covert. She noticed that his complete skin was burned off."He...lost his face...to something...like this."Tears start to roll over her cheeks. Chaos ripped that last chain off his face leaving a completely burned face behind.He gets up and starts to walk again.

He arrives at an pretty old looking inn. He enters the inn. Alias was still following him and notices that the happy music that was playing stopped. The people in the inn were looking at him.He walks straight upstairs and enters a room the looks like a living room."Mom....i'm baahaaack."He shouted while he unsheeted his sword again."No...no....Chaos...is he...going to....kill...his own mother." Alias said to herself as she started to cry. She saw the mother of Chaos walk out of the kitchen with 2 other girls."Those must...be...her sisters....what RUN RUN! HE'S GONNA KILL YOU RUN FOR YOUR LIVES!"She tries to make them clear that they're gonna be killed."Chaos where is your father?" His mother asks him."I killed him allong his own squad for trying to arrest me...and i'm gonna finish it right here and now!"Before the woman could reply they were cut to pieces while Alias starts to cry louder and louder.

There was a loud bang inside the kitchen and in a smoke cloud another reaper appeared.She recognizes him as the supreme reaper."Chaos, Chaos, Chaos."The shadow supreme reaper said."Shut up you little twit."Chaos said and throws his sword to the Shadow reaper instantly killing him."Chaos...you...lil unthankfull b*****d...you killed my lil shadow reaper....now ur dead."The supreme reaper takes out a strange looking katana with red tribals all over the blade."That's what the other reaper said before i killed him."Chaos said before he dissappeared and grabbed his blade in the great speed he had at the moment he appeared again he was cut in 2 pieces."Yes but the difference is that i'm the greatest reaper that exists."He grabs the remains of Chaos and dissappears again.She slowly starts to swirl again.

She slowly opens her eyes and sees Chaos. She acts like she's scared and drops on the floor."Hmm...i already thought that this would happen."He says with a strange smile at Alias."C'mon we're almost there so lets get started."He helps her up and they walk to the Old looking city."it looks exactly like that place where Chaos killed his familie."Alias thought while they slowly enter.

Strange ending yup^_^thats cuz there might come a part 3 if i want to^_^
and yes still no supreme reaper image cuuuuz*drums* still the same reason^_^and i got no idea how i should make him look like

and do please leave an comment>.<






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Dark Silver Firefly
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commentCommented on: Thu Sep 20, 2007 @ 02:05pm
*flattens her fox ears scared* ._. You're weird...but it's fun to read!! xd


commentCommented on: Thu Sep 20, 2007 @ 08:52pm
OMMFGWTF im soooo damn jealous xD you definatly write interesting stories ^^



Rena Remix
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Kurayami Hoshi Ryu
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commentCommented on: Sun Sep 23, 2007 @ 06:09pm
awesome 9and I like it b etter than Jesse's so far ^.^


commentCommented on: Mon Sep 24, 2007 @ 07:44pm
i also love this bit!!
keep it going :]
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Sexual Harrassment Rhino
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Shaildaran
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commentCommented on: Fri Nov 09, 2007 @ 11:22pm
awesome story^.^ i love it!...although if it was a moive...i dont think i could watch all the blood and guts>.<


commentCommented on: Fri Feb 29, 2008 @ 02:58am
Still a nice idea, creepy how he decied to kill them but also not that hard to see. You could try to develop the face that he is oppsessed with power o taht extanet. Still need to run it through a grammer check or something and need to work on the transitions.



NiotaHime
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