I make pretty poems!
Love/Hate
Love
Warmth, passion
Kissing, hugging, holding
Hearts, doves, enemy, bully
Despising, hurting, loathing
Shame, plague
Hate
Boy Scout Ferret
There once was a black ferret
Who tried to get his merit
But the task was too hard
So he slumped through the yard
What a sad little ferret.
Poem for mexican dude....
My Secret
I see you from afar
With your girlfriend in hand
You thinking that you are in love
I burn inside
Knowing that is not me next to you
What you don’t know
I am hurting myself everyday for you
No matter how much I hurt
You will never know
That my scars are for you
Love/Hate
Love
Warmth, passion
Kissing, hugging, holding
Hearts, doves, enemy, bully
Despising, hurting, loathing
Shame, plague
Hate
Boy Scout Ferret
There once was a black ferret
Who tried to get his merit
But the task was too hard
So he slumped through the yard
What a sad little ferret.
Poem for mexican dude....
My Secret
I see you from afar
With your girlfriend in hand
You thinking that you are in love
I burn inside
Knowing that is not me next to you
What you don’t know
I am hurting myself everyday for you
No matter how much I hurt
You will never know
That my scars are for you
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Oh, and you should use punctuation and not capitalize every line. It seems more emotional to me, that the person writing it feels so hurt, and so chopped up that they made the form of their poem that way as well. (Mind you I'm a tough critic.)