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My Grimoire
Some of my concepts for my guilds from the past and future.
Act One; Scene Four
Scene Four:
New friends and New Enemies


As Kazuki was getting ready to strike the hooded foe, a young man about a year or two older than Kazuki, with medium black hair dashed in front of Kazuki and the struck first. The hood foe moved at the last second so the blade only cut his coat sleeve. The hooded foe had a strange symbol on his arm, but covered it. Kazuki sled to a stop and then held his sword at the ready as he saw Akura she was holding two twin blade Katanas and her back was against the far wall near the window

Kazuki: “Its you...um Akura.”

Akura: “Not now this guy needs to be stopped first Kazuki”

Kazuki: “Hey how do you know my name?”

Akura: “It’s a long story I will explain latter”

Young man (???): “Hey kid look out!”

The hooded figure was one foot away from Kazuki before drawing his sword. The Man with the short black hair quickly ran in front of Kazuki and moved his large broad sword up and to the side to block the attack. The foe was only using one hand as he held the young man’s sword down he looked like he was barely trying. Kazuki leaped forward and struck downward on his shoulder. The hooded man leaped backwards bring his sword with him.

Young man (???): “If your not going to fight then leave now and leave it to the Military!”

Kazuki: “Do you know who I am?”

Akura: “No, Kazuki get out of there look at his left hand” (She ran with both swords to her side extended and then jumped into the air and started to spin around in a circle only seeing the blades and not her body.)

Hooded Man: (His left hand was glowing green )“Your all pathetic” (he then kicked his left foot behind him showing his steel boots and kicked Akura in the stomach sending her flying into the window.)

Yuffi: “Akura!” (she roared and jumped after her and started to fly on the wind looking like she was running on the air. She caught Akura on her golden fur and flew back up to the window)

As they got back to the room Kazuki and then other guy where teamed up fighting the hooded foe. The foe then was kick in the chest by the black haired guy as Kazuki slashed him against his stomach sending his to his knees. Akura jumped off of Yuffi and rolled into the room. Yuffi followed.

Young man (???): “By the law of China I Master Kai Hooseki of the Divine Flame charges you with emptive murder.”

Hooded Man: He laughed and then vanished though the ground

Kazuki: “Ok, who are you and how did you even know we where going to need help.” (he said as he helped Akura stand up)

Kai: “I did not know that I was tracking you, the Monks of the Rising Sun told me to accompany you and if you don’t believe me to have the dragon show the truth. If you would not have ran from the airport then I would have picked you up and took you to my place.”

Kazuki: (Once Kai said that Shin had flew into the room through the broken window and was glowing bright blue landed on Kazuki‘s shoulder) “Fine lets see if you’re lying. Show me, light which glows bright show me the warrior.” (The dragon shot two beams of light from his eyes and one went to Kai and the other to Akura)

Akura: “That’s impossible, I was trying to.....”

Kazuki: “Trying to what Akura?

Akura: (She sighed and sat down telling them everything about the phone call to kill Kazuki about how she is an assassin)

Kai: “Oh well, what’s done is done. We should get going before some one comes to see what was the noises were about.”

Kazuki: “That or Mr. Hood comes back with some more friends. Lets head to your place for the night and leave early tomorrow.”

Kai: “Right, and I think I know who that was. I will tell you once we get to my place.”

Akura: “Yuffi, lets go we going to go along with them

Yuffi: (More of the strange blue fire went around the large fox and then she shrunk back into a small one tailed fox with gold fur. Yuffi hoped onto Akura’s shoulder and then smiled) “We have friends now, and you don’t have to kill Kazuki, I like him too he has beautiful brown hair.” Yuffi whispered

They all jumped out of the window and landed on the broken glass, and started to walk to Kai’s house. It was pitch black and hard to see, but they made it to his home in one piece. Yuffi and Shin where sleep mainly from the walk over. Akura was very quite and stayed out of the conversation on the way there. They finally reached Kai’s home it was rather large but it said Dojo on the mailbox along with Kai’s name. The three walked to the house and Kai opened the door and showed everyone to a room. Kazuki’s room was right next to Akura’s room and Kai’s room was down the hall. Kazuki could not sleep that battle was more than what he wanted to happen. Kazuki got out of his bed and walked down to Kai’s room but saw him in the dojo training.

Kai: (Kai was a tall guy with many muscles he also was quite, and was focused on just his on self. Kai was wearing some read samurai pants and a long sleeve shirt. His black eyes where like the night sky of space that struck fear in the hearts of his enemies.) “Ha.” (he called out as he slashed with his sword in three places and then jumped into the air and did a back flip onto the rafters and began to flip and slash with his sword.) “I will kill you next time Jake.”

Kazuki: (Kazuki jumped up on to the rafters behind Kai and then Kai turned around his sword at Kazuki’s neck, if Kazuki did not draw his sword and block.) “Who is Jake?”

Kai: “Jake is a man, that was apart of my squad in the military, but he tried to kill us over who was in charge of the mission. The thing is he uses fans as a weapon but that guy moved the sword like it was a fan.”

Kazuki: “So he is like a rival to you huh.”

Kai: “You could call it that. But he is more like a enemy to the country of china. Last I heard was that he has joined something called The Demons of Death.”

Kazuki: “Well, I guess we will run into him again. I remember a tattoo or a mark of some sort, it was the symbol of air with the markings of death and different elements around it. I guess that group is after all the people who are or will be involved with me.

Kai: “Thanks, for listening to me. Lets go get some sleep tomorrow we go to Germany.”

Kazuki smiles and Kai smiles back as they leap down to the ground and walk to their sprat rooms for the night. The next morning everyone awoke right before sunrise around six o-clock in the morning. Akura had on a pink kimono and her hair tied in a bun Kai seared at her for about two minutes before Kazuki slapped his arm snapping him out of his daydream. Kazuki was wearing a dark blue cloak and black pants and a shirt his hair tied with a long ribbon giving his hair a long ponytail. Kai was wearing his old military uniform which where blue and gray army pants and a white T-shirt. Kai’s broad sword was in a sheath on his back. Akura’s swords where under her Kimono and Kazuki’s was under his cloak and tied on his obi. The group set out on their quest to the country of Germany, in a Kai’s jeep that they picked up from the Chinese Military Base Camp.






User Comments: [2]
flamesbladeflcl1000
Community Member





Sat Apr 05, 2008 @ 07:06am


Umm, a jeep... again reminds me of Saiyuki.
The sudden intro of one character quickly followed by another. the rapid scene changes and suddenly going to Germany. It all seems rather rushed, slow down and expand more on ideas at this point my ideas of who the characters are, is very limited. But I don't mean it to sound like I don't like it, I do I'm just trying to be helpful.


Riku Hawkeye
Community Member





Sat Apr 05, 2008 @ 09:36pm


Road trip! xd


User Comments: [2]
 
 
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