He he a story i wrote a while back
The wrath of jack
A trio of friends end up in a forest called Serpent’s Ruins. Their names were Zero Beat, Fadork, and SupMC, as they venture through the forest they hear a scream and it gets there attention. They dash to where it originated, as they get there they see a three mummies and a boy with a sword. SupMC tackles one of them and Zero kicks on in the face, his head comes off but he’s still alive! They save the boy but SupMC is captured by the “Immortals.”
The boy’s name is Dragon Slayer, he told Zero and Fadork about the Immortals. Dragon just found out that they were working for Jack of Halloween. Although Zero was clueless Fadork knew many things about this mischievous person. Dragon actually saw him go into the temple in the middle of the forest. As they ventured to the temple Zero asked “what’s so scary about Jack?” A deep silence fell over the group. Fadork offered to tell. “He cut his own head off for Eternal life, and through every Halloween he knew that pumpkins were being used as scary faces so he carved one for his head.”
Zero gave a brief bio of himself”One I’m not scared of Jack, two I'm a fighter not a fearer ,and three I’m not goin to lose a friend to a guy who cut his own head off” Fadork interrupted “ but he’s thirty-two feet tall!” Dragon whispers “shut up you two he’s coming!” As they hid the giant walks crouched over heading to the temple. They follow Jack till he was out into the open. Dragon made a whistling sound. Jack said “Ralengar”
As the kids hear his voice a shriek of horror fell through their minds. Jack goes into the temple and when the door closes a giant wolf comes out of the sky. The wolf’s name was Roro for his bravery. Dragon and Roro fanned out for the Immortals while Zero and Fadork go after Jack. When they open the door the Immortals were right inside.
“How did you get in here?!” Fadork and Zero say at the same time. “Looking for Jack?” said the Immortal leader. “We’ll race to jack here’s a map you want roller blades or a skate board?” the Immortal leader asked. “I got my own skates and I’ll find my own way.” Zero insisted “are you sure you want to do this Zero?” Fadork wondered. “Yes, and whistle for Roro and Dragon” Zero hands Fadork a dog whistle.
The race begins, Zero and the Immortal leader race down hill and go through vigorous obstacles. Sharp turns and quarter pipe grinds set Zero in the lead. Zero wins the race and the Immortals turn to dust. Roro and Dragon come as Fadork and Zero head for the chamber hall.
The door opens and SupMC Is hanging over a spike pit. Fadork and Zero yell “MC are you alright?” as Jack a rose from his chair. “Fadork, how do you kill someone who’s invincible?” Zero asked. “Just hit his weak points,” Fadork replied “which is his head.” “Ok thanks for the info!” Zero replied.
Zero and Roro attack Jack while Fadork and Dragon save SupMC. Zero and Roro get slapped to the ground from Jack’s over sized hands. After Dragon and Fadork save SupMC he jumps on Jack’s head and says “Hanging over a pit all day doesn’t mean I can’t listen to your conversations.” SupMC kicks Jack’s pumpkin head stem and he disappears. The temple went from dark and evil to light and good. So the kids venture onward to their dream vacation spots and Jack was out their lives, for now
· Sun Mar 25, 2007 @ 02:00pm · 1 Comments