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Fanasy World My name is Tom this story is about a boy named Tomi Conahara. when Tom, thats me, hears about a strang new evil named Sin attacking the water village Tom gos to find his brother.Not being able to find his brother Tom hears that some people saw Sam,


tomstupidboy
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Fanasy World: The Begining
Rave-"I'm...Sorry."


Tom:

I was in my seat thinking...not of Embriom City, what's to come, but instead I was thinking:

" I can't just sit here and wait and see. Rave needs my help."

Tom-"I'm going back!"

Leo-"Rock on. Now were talken'."

Tom-"No Leo, not you. Me."

I began walking to the ships door. I grabbed my hover board and told em' to open the door. As soon as it opened I flew off.

Leo:

I realy didn't see why I couldn't go. Why we could go. But I would later relize it wasn't selfishness but friendship.

Tom:

Tom-"Leo, if I don't make it back... your in control."

Leo looked at me as if I had died.

Leo-"But what if the worst to happen."

Tom-" Hasn't it already?"

Leo-"Yay."

Tom-"Well then..."

I jumped off the ship and began to ride my hover board.

Rave:

Rave-“SIN!”

Sin Widened his eyes and began turning around. I started to harness my power. AND I HIT SIN! As I put my feet to the floor, Sin flew to a nearby building.

Sin-“Hehehehehehehehehee.”

In the dense fog I could see sins yellow eye. Once he walked out of the fog I saw that he was bleeding.

Sin-“Hmm. Just a scratch.’

I could understand him. He considered a big hole in his stomach a scratch.

Tom:

“Half way there. I think…yay. I’ll come threw the back. Crash threw a building and attack.”

I began to fly around.

Sin:

“Hehehehehee. I can see him tremble with fear.”

Sin-“What’s the matter Rave, not scared are you, after all these years.”

Sin-“Come on lets…”

Tom:

I crashed my hover board threw the building with me on it. Right when I hit Sin, I flipped off of my hover board. With the board in the air I began flipping on the ground.

Rave:

“Tom…what is he doing here?”

Tom:

Rave-“Tom what are you doing?”

Tom-“Jus’ thought you could use some help.”

Sin began to get up.

Sin-“Hehehehehehe, HA! Look at this, two friends helping each other. What a true friendship.”

Tom-“Bring it on Sin!”

Sin-“Well I guess I should give up. Two vs. one… I can’t win.”

Tom-“Really…awe man, I mean ya.”

Sin-“Although…you’ve underestimated me Tom. I was planning this from the very beginning!”

Sin brang out an orb of dark matter and he threw it to the ground.

Sin-“Let’s continue this battle…IN ATHOUSAND YEARS!!”

All of a sudden the orb began to grow and I started running.

Tom-“Rave come on!”

I grabbed Rave and then later my hover board and we took off towards the ship.
A few miles away from the darkness Rave spoke.

Rave-“I’m sorry Tom.”

Tom-“What do ya mean?”

I turned back and saw Rave falling off of the hover board.

Tom-“Rave!!”

Rave-“I’M SORRY!!!”

I tried to save him but for some reason he didn’t want my help. So I went on looking my friend one…last… time.

Riu:

I started climbing (finally) to the top of the building.

Riu-“Stupid Sin couldn’t give a signal. Oh ya, ‘We don’t do Signals Riu.’
Ok, now what was I suppose to…ah yes kill Tomi Conahara.”

I brang out a dimand and threw it at Toms hover board.

Leo:

I opened the door waiting for Tom to finally come back in and then it happened.
From the corner of my eye I saw Riu throw a dimand into the engine of Toms hover board.

Tom:

Leo-“TOM!”

I looked back quickly as Leo Pointed toward the dimand thrown into my engine.
I looked back ant Leo and…

*click*

Tom-*Gasp*

And like that…I was dead





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Notra Osuka
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comment Commented on: Fri Mar 16, 2007 @ 06:32am
its larry hihi im cassdy's auntie erica


comment Commented on: Sun Mar 18, 2007 @ 01:35am
she's not my REAL aunt just on my story!!!!



MentallyChallengedNinja
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MentallyChallengedNinja
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comment Commented on: Sat Mar 24, 2007 @ 03:16am
who's Rave?


comment Commented on: Mon Apr 09, 2007 @ 05:09pm
You're dead..now what happens???



Lostandconfusedlove
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lie of Oblivions oath
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comment Commented on: Thu May 31, 2007 @ 02:01am
well every one tomstupibboys password got changed...... and he dosent rember it so im sorry about that and his pc isent working so he wont be on for a while how do i know? im his best friend in real life A.K.A. Leo im not lying i dont think hell be on here in a while untill then im going to ask if i can put the storys on my profile giving him full cedits of some thing for it......taco bell kicks a**


comment Commented on: Sat Jan 12, 2008 @ 05:56am
Hi peeps the story changed so i have to change it . i'm not back for ever though



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