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x.- A very Surreal Story -.x
I like to write stories, usally fantasy. Maybe i'll post the beginning of a story as a journal entry.
~ Coco Neko! ~
I'm thinking up a new story, this'll be the stuff you see at the back, i'll need your comments, saying if you'd read more.


A cat sat on a high stone archway, overlooking a shrine.
Beneath the cat was a sign, bearing the title 'Kasai Shrine'. The cat was a gray colour, with splashes of black and white along his legs and back. It's ears were orange.
The cat's eyes were bright silver, and they were fixed on the door to the shrine house.
Inside, a family was seated at the table, sipping Tea.
A girl, about the age of fourteen, thoughtfully looked out the window, and jumped in surprise at the cat.
"There's a cat out there," The girl said, standing up and walking to the window to get a better look.
"What was that, Chi?" the girl's mother asked her, tilting her head to the side in question.
Chi, who had turned to look at her mother, switched her gaze back to the archway, to find that the mysterious cat had disappeared. "Nothing Mama...I just thought I saw something, thats all" Chi sat back down and took another sip from her tea. How had a cat jumped twenty feet?
Outside, it had begun to rain. The cat was sitting by the Kasai family's door. It's eyes were fixed on the full moon, that was currently in the sky. It's ears twitched once, and it leaped onto the roof of the house, small feathered wings were poking through the fur on it's ankles. The cat seated it's self at Chi's windowsill, watching the girl climb into her bed. The cat blinked again as Chi drifted off to sleep. A purple glow surrounded her, and after about ten minutes, faded.
The cat was gone, the only trace it had been there at all was a few feathers on the window sill.

The next morning, Chi yawned and opened her eyes. She switched off her alarm and stood up, using her paws to flatten her whiskers.
After realising what she was doing, and the fact that she had paws, sent a chill of surprise up Chi's spine. She hurried to her mirror and let out a yowl, she had large orange ears, silver eyes and whiskers. Her paws, which had replaced her hands and feet, were black and white. She had a long tail, that was a mix of orange, black and white.
Chi fell over in a dead faint.

~Tell me what you think! Should I keep going?

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  • User Comments: [5] [add]
    Anime Em
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    commentCommented on: Sun Feb 27, 2005 @ 07:52pm
    Duuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuude!! I LOVE your story. You should definately keep on going. I really wish that I could write like you. I guess I should just keep practicing though, Right? You should take it off Gaia and try to get it published or something. It's good. Too good for Gaia, and I would really really like to see you write the rest.

    Dude, it's so cool!

    x Emily_Chan

    commentCommented on: Mon Mar 07, 2005 @ 12:43am
    hey, i love your siggy cuz i made it whoot you shud write more!!

    s3x k1tty
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    Anime Em
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    commentCommented on: Sun Apr 24, 2005 @ 04:29pm

    commentCommented on: Mon Sep 05, 2005 @ 05:38pm
    I like it.

    I love storys..i wish i chould write one with someone... gonk

    [Quiet Emo]
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    commentCommented on: Tue Sep 20, 2005 @ 10:51pm
    oh yes, do write more!
    (whee..the name Chi reminds me of Chobits..and the cat reminds me of the cat, Luna, from sailor moon! RANDOMZZZ)

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