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time is passing are u?


Nasakaa
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women in the USA
My opinon on how women should and should not be treated! hopes u like it!!


Women in the USA

“it is said that a women should grow up go to school marry and produce a

family” said in 1954. Yet it is 2006 and people still say that most of the image for

women is that they make good house wives and nothing more. That us “women” should

stay in the kitchen and cook for are husbands. So we are telling the girls to go to high

school and college and graduate and what do we as women or young girls from there?

We should take the knowledge for a granted and go to a universality and become the

future lawyers, scientists, and even the first women presidents! If we only stop telling

ourselves that our only use is in our households. Instead we should be hearing that

women are equal to men. That we have the same purpose as a creature of God yes

we should respect our husbands but we should not fall under them. We should not

become household salves and complete their ever command. We should stand up for

ourselves and say “ I will feed, care, and love my children I will protect my family but I

shall work and have a job to help my husband with the money expensive. Many years ago

the most intelligent men sad that women shouldn’t vote that our opinion in the world

was not needed but yes it was and still is. But now the has changed by those very same

women who’s opinion did not count.

“We has women should come together stand up for the justice for us and for our

daughter’s and granddaughter’s and never forget that as a child of god we are created

equal and that men or any another person does not rule over us”!

Danielle Trueba, November 20, 2006





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xx_hinata_rocks!!_xx
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comment Commented on: Sat Dec 23, 2006 @ 08:12pm
yeah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


comment Commented on: Sat Dec 23, 2006 @ 08:30pm
*crosses arms behind head* looks like u did ur homework and I disagree ON SOME PARTS but thats just my opinion 3nodding



Coded one
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waterblossom_95
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comment Commented on: Mon Dec 25, 2006 @ 01:00am
i love it!! must spirit lefting!!
i give it 2 thumbs up!! biggrin biggrin biggrin


comment Commented on: Mon Dec 25, 2006 @ 01:05am
i really like this journal entry.

3nodding



smiley_girl_1010
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Nasakaa
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comment Commented on: Tue Dec 26, 2006 @ 02:15am
well i'm happy u enjoyed it! heart


comment Commented on: Tue Dec 26, 2006 @ 02:28am
((from a critical veiw))
the writing over all is well writen, however this isn't exactly a fresh topic. You did a good job on it however you could have found ways to spicen it up a bit instead of repeating the common high lights on the subject
(( sweatdrop sorry, I'm reading reveiws right now and seem to be a bit of a critic; I do like the writing though))



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Nasakaa
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comment Commented on: Tue Dec 26, 2006 @ 02:34am
thank u Sango comments like that make my writing stronger so i'll take that in mind next time i right another article!


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