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This is where I post my poems for everyone to read. Please feel free to comment on them. I like posting random tidbits of everyday life as well!

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Sinking Emotions taken along for the ride love washing out with the mornin' tide body left out there like a lost buoy S I N K I N G Eyes watching with a shimmer of pain tall lean body up and leaving her again fed to the sharks of memories long lost S I N K I N G Walking hand in hand along the shore so many damn memories happen nevermore body whipped around in the ocean of time S I N K I N G Waking to find that the dream is true alone in the bed with nothing she can do waves of everlasting sadness encase her mind S I N K I N G Grasping at straws as old scents stray never able to wash him completely away foundations built on sand tumble around her S I N K I N G House empty of all sounds of love and joy walking through she can't even find her boy seaweed holding her to the place of untold desire S I N K I N G Amber waves cascading around her no more feeling brandy smells linger on her lips leave her reeling allowing the tides to grab a hold and take her away S I N K I N G Summer Rayne Oct. 18, 2006 5:19pm

Posted by: Summer Rayne Wed Oct 18, 2006 @ 10:45pm

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MidnightShadow7
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Commented on: Thu Oct 19, 2006 @ 02:46am


	I love the way that this is so visual...I know you dont wanna hear this but its beautiful heart I may start posting some of my own stuff

Commented on: Thu Oct 19, 2006 @ 12:27pm


	Nice One Again!

-King Johan-
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wildfiremf
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Commented on: Thu Oct 19, 2006 @ 07:30pm


	this ones good, I myself enjoyed falling better for some reason. I wish I could write like this. Keep up the good work. biggrin

Commented on: Sat Oct 21, 2006 @ 04:04pm


	lovely like it 4laugh

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-King Johan-
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Commented on: Sun Oct 22, 2006 @ 02:34am


	And BTW, Hope to see more sis ^_^ 3nodding 3nodding

Commented on: Sun Oct 22, 2006 @ 04:46am


	twisted kool kinda carries you away... twisted

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aimingayms
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Commented on: Mon Oct 23, 2006 @ 10:37am


	your poems are really good!! keep them coming! biggrin

Commented on: Mon Oct 23, 2006 @ 08:53pm


	The first line of the last verse doesn't sit quite right i think...almostcliche ...but i LOVE the rest. Honest and objective enough? see ya hun

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a_fallin_dragons_tear
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Commented on: Tue Oct 31, 2006 @ 04:57am


	I wish i could write as good as you exclaim

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