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My rambles and poems
Yeah thats right I write poems if u dont like it deal but if u do enjoy yourself
This was like my earliest one so I dont think its that good
Twilight Kiss

As sure as the wind flows freely trough the night, love flies trough the hearts of many

An incredible emotion that appears in but a moment and yet lives on in ones soul for a lifetime

Its strength is immeasurable; its power alone can warm even the coldest of hearts and heal a dying soul

And yet with unimaginable force break it all in the blink of an eye

Love is a dangerous emotion. Simple, but dangerous

But who am I one who has not ever felt love’s true touch

I am merely a being longing to realize what such an emotion truly is

I desperately want to feel the rapture a true loves touch and yet I fear the rejection of my feelings from another

Am I but a coward? Maybe .Maybe not. When my time comes to see loves true nature, only time will tell





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    LovelyCrimson
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    commentCommented on: Mon Aug 14, 2006 @ 02:53am
    OMG!! that's really good...it almost brought tears to my eyes...you like writing poetry?


    commentCommented on: Mon Aug 14, 2006 @ 06:02pm
    hey thats really good. i really like it keep up the good work that was great xd



    Crystal16
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    Lady Mariana
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    commentCommented on: Tue Aug 15, 2006 @ 01:54pm
    hey, I really like it. It's not to often you find a guy who like's to write. So how many poems have you writtin?


    commentCommented on: Sat Sep 16, 2006 @ 08:20pm
    I love it you can actually feel the emotion coming out of it nice 3nodding



    Toki No Boushin
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    commentCommented on: Mon Sep 18, 2006 @ 10:20pm
    That was beautiful and its was sweet it brought joy to my eye keep working hard


    commentCommented on: Mon Sep 18, 2006 @ 11:44pm
    Amazing. A piece of poetry that isn't about one's suffering or the mutilation of one's self to ease said suffering. Not bad at all... Although you spelled 'through' wrong. >_>



    Konohas_Green_Beast
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    commentCommented on: Tue Sep 19, 2006 @ 12:19am
    Nice! If I rate you from 1 to 10 and 10 is the highest... I gave you 8!!! Keep it up bro... 3nodding


    commentCommented on: Tue Sep 19, 2006 @ 02:36am
    woow thats deep.......... lol so beautiful........... *starts crying* cry



    brunette_barbie_su
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    commentCommented on: Tue Sep 19, 2006 @ 10:37pm
    Holy crap! You know what? That's exactly how I feel!! The last two lines really got to me! I could relate to that, and it was very well written 4laugh How long have you been writing poetry? I actually just started, and no one's read them but me, but maybe we could get together and... critique each other or something ^^; Just an idea, you don't have to answer back.


    commentCommented on: Wed Sep 20, 2006 @ 08:21am
    I heart heart heart it! It's really good! I have a poems... but lost them... one I liked most of all... when I find it I'll post it. smile



    RisTesla
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    commentCommented on: Sun Nov 12, 2006 @ 10:32pm
    thts a really awesome poem biggrin


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