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Slow Dance

This is a poem written by a teenager with cancer.

She wants to see how many people get her poem.

It is quite the poem. Please pass it on.

This poem was written by a termin***y ill young girl in a New York Hospital.

It was sent by a medical doctor.

Make sure to read what is in the closing statement AFTER THE POEM.


Have you ever watched kids

On a merry-go-round?

Or listened to the rain

Slapping on the ground?

Ever followed a butterfly's erratic flight?

Or gazed at the sun into the fading night?

You better slow down.

Don't dance so fast.

Time is short.

The music won't last.

Do you run through each day

On the fly?

When you ask How are you?

Do you hear the reply?

When the day is done


Do you lie in your bed

With the next hundred chores

Running through your head?

You'd better slow down

Don't dance so fast.

Time is short.

The music won't last.

Ever told your child,

We'll do it tomorrow?

And in your haste,

Not see his sorrow?

Ever lost touch,

Let a good friendship die

Cause you never had time

To c*** and say,"Hi"

You'd better slow down.

Don't dance so fast.

Time is short.

The music won't last.

When you run so fast to get somewhere

You miss half the fun of getting there.

When you worry and hurry through your day,

It is like an unopened gift....

Thrown away.

Life is not a race.

Do take it slower

Hear the music

Before the song is over.

Xenos Sama
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  • User Comments: [4]

    comment +JackzFactory+ · Community Member · Thu Aug 17, 2006 @ 12:03am
    I think I've gotten that poem in a couple of FWDs... sweatdrop

    comment Ladyluvscats · Community Member · Fri Aug 18, 2006 @ 10:24am
    that's so beautiful.

    comment kiera567 · Community Member · Sun Sep 10, 2006 @ 06:42pm
    Wow, it is very good.

    comment x!Lingo!x · Community Member · Sat Feb 24, 2007 @ 09:23pm
    User Comments: [4]

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