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MY POEMS
these r the poems i hav so far, that i havent lost
poem-A Simplified Love
A Simplified Love


I have met someone new today.
Her name will be concealed.
But, she gave me a cookie right away.
A cookie is what she gave me starting December 29th 2004.


Within a few days I was given a cupcake.
She started giving me a cake starting January 12th 2005.
It wasnt just any cake.
It was the best cake I ever had, I wanted more!


Since then, everyday she gave me this most wonderful pastry.
I didn't mean too...
But sometimes I messed up the cake or ruined it, I was being too hasty.
More like a lot of times other than just sometimes.


After a few months she got mad at me for messing it up.
Instead of giving me a cake she gave me a very bitter tart.
It was only for a few days while I was starving like a pup.
After that she didnt give me anything, I ruined all the good times.


After a few months later.
Just a little while ago.
She gave me a cookie again, yeah! bye anger, see you later.
Though she said she would never give me cake anymore


That was the best cake I ever had.
I wouldnt be able to take cake from anyone else.
I really hope she gives me cake again, this is bad
Because she sounded certain that she wont give me cake like before.


And now its worse, it hurts the core.
Im also too scared to take cake from anyone else, thats why Im writing these rhymes.
I dont want to take the chance of messing up any other cakes, my heart is too sore





D_zee315
Community Member
  • 07/23/06 to 07/16/06 (1)

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    GracelessWonder
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    commentCommented on: Mon Jul 17, 2006 @ 03:53am
    I like them biggrin


    commentCommented on: Mon Aug 28, 2006 @ 02:27am
    Cakes Yum *yes im hyper off cake at the moment*



    GracelessWonder
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