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im gonna give you my opinion on life and its many hardships ALSO I WRITE ALL MY OWN POETRY PEOPLE !!!
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Bury Me In Sheol

Existing is this world made dark only by thought

Shadows clutch a soul that has been made to rot

Gripping tightly wrists and ankles of the dying one

Reflecting pass transgressions all the evil he had done

Twisting and turning the heartstrings within his chest

Take his will and breath till there is no life left

O' pitiful creature in the night you may only dwell

It is your paintbrush that has made this canvas into hell

Your sins shall eat at you till you are but bone

No sanctuary, no safe place, nowhere to call home.

Awaken in a sweat from this dream unwell

Knowing you will return to this version of hell.

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commentCommented on: Sun Jun 23, 2013 @ 06:03am
I love this. It really paints a vision that I think a lot of people can probably relate to. Very well written. Dark, but amazing.

commentCommented on: Sun Jun 23, 2013 @ 06:05am
thank you! I really appreciate it.

Chaotic Chains
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