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My days as a hero
This is the begening of a story that i plan to publish in the future, it might not be as good, but its what im thinking of
Chapter 7- No Where To Run
Now that I see the enemy's face, i soon realized what his name was... Shega, he was a loyal solder in the El Cinos, but really...really stupid. Was this one of the murderers? How? Did he gain some new idea on life... making him intelegent... that was the pig problem, I saw Lyan lay still on the dark rocks, he was alive. I ordered the men to grab him and retreat, and i soon followed, just then.. Joeys sword glowed and so did my teams Armor... I heard Joeys voice.. "It is the will of the ancient flames... dont be afraid, take the chance" and we were then in an empty room, where, when i thought i lost my mind.. Joey stood at the gates, and on the gates said "Long Live the Ancient Flames"






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charlebear
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commentCommented on: Wed Jun 20, 2012 @ 11:32pm
so much grammar errors!but over all fantastic cat_3nodding


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