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This where I'll post my fiction stories for your input (comments, concerns, corrections, ideas, critques, etc.) With all due respect; please, if you have anything you want to say about my writing that may need to touch up, then be as assertive as you
Trapped
Orochimaru runs a mental hospital and you’re trapped inside. You don’t know how you got there, but you want out. There’s only one problem – no one has ever escaped the mental hospital and it’s not just the patients there who have psychological issues…
I do not own Naruto nor any of its characters.
(WARNING: Major horror, blood/gore, and psychological thriller content. May scare the crap out of you. I am not held responsible if you get nightmares or soil a good pair of pants. You have been warned.)

Story Start
You wake up, head pounding and dazed as you look around your new surroundings. “W-where am I?” you asked yourself you see that your in a white, cushiony cubed room and on the opposite side from where you are, you see a door to the left and from the middle to the right is a big rectangular window with people standing outside of it. They were facing you as they talked to each other. You can’t really hear them, but you strain your ears to hear, “… new arrival?” “Yes…I’m afraid…quite dangerous. …shame…what s/he did…poor souls.” Huh? Where am I? what is this place? Why am I here? NEW ARRIVAL?! What does that mean? what’s going on?! you thought frantically. Suddenly, a young man in a lab coat that looks about your age, white hair, and round glasses came in and said, “Greetings, newcomer. I’m Kabuto Yakushi and you’re at the Kyouki Nemutteiru (Sleeping + Madness) Mental Institution.” “There MUST be some kind of mistake, sir. I am sane, I am rational, I AM NOT SUPPOSED TO BE HERE!!” you shouted, obviously upset. “Calm down patient, I will explain everything when I escort you to your new room, as it is now ready for you.” said Kabuto, calm and smoothly. You wanted to punch him for putting you here, but your straight jacket prevents you to do so as you both go down the hallway, followed by guards.

“You see, *looks down at clipboard to see your name* (your name), you were originally going to a party over at one of your friend’s house. They were all having such a great time, that is until you snapped.” said Kabuto. You gave him a funny look and was about to speak when he held his hand up, signaling you to let him finish. “You must’ve been in a great emotional upset, for you came armed with knives and slaughtered most of the party guests. You stabbed the female victims in the [boobs] and [other part] while all of the male victims had their [parts] cut off. For all guests of both sexes, you slit their throats, cut their chests open, stabbed them in the mouth, decapitated them –” “Wait a minute, I remember this,” you said, “but I didn’t do any of these things, I was one of the lucky few to escape with my life. Someone else came and crashed the party –” “What did this person look like?” inquired Kabuto. “I-I don’t know, it was all a blur – an almost surreal nightmare. But surely you all have the wrong person.” “I assure you we do not have the wrong person as you were the one wielding the knives. You were covered – no, drenched – in your victim’s blood.” stated Kabuto. “But there’s got to be some way I can show you I’m innocent. I need to get out of here –” Kabuto stared at you with wide eyes, grinning creepily at you as he said, “What did you say?” “I need to get out if this institution –” Kabuto throws his head back and laughs wildly and hysterically. “That’s what I thought you said, but I’m afraid you’re out of luck if you think you can simply leave this place.” “W-what do y-you mean I c-can’t leave? What about m-my family?” you said, your voice trembling with fear. Kabuto adjusted his coat and swiftly turned around to face you as he leaned in a said in a lowered voice, “I’m afraid that once you are deemed to be too dangerous to live out in society, you are condemned to live here,” and then even lower with a sneer, “up until the day you die.”



This what I have so far, so any questions? whee





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