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Love's Edge
this is a description of a short novel i am planning on writing. the description will be the journal entry
Love's Edge Chapter 10-2E
I looked up at Trixie who has gotten up and has been walking circles around me for about two minutes. I tried to speak but it was pointless. My throat feels as though a bus has driven over my neck. All I could manage was a pitiful croak. Trixie managed to lift me off the floor and lye me in the bed on my back with my fingers locked together and my hands rested on my stomach. Trixie laid down on the bed beside me on her side facing me. I struggled to turn my head to look over at her, she was dragging her finger in circles on my chest. “What should we do first, hun?” She whispered followed by a loud, high-pitched squeal. “Oh that feels so GOOD to say!” She shrieked. She lifted her right leg and brought it around my body. She lifted herself and now was sitting on top of me. “Hmm… You should be able to move again soon. But if you can move, then you’ll leave, and we won’t be happy, and that’s not right. Right?” Trixie leaned forward with her hands on my shoulders. She whispered into my ear, “I know what you want to say, and I agree. But just to be safe…” Trixie lifted her head, bared her fangs in my face, then bit me hard in the neck in the same place she did before. My body felt as if I was struck by lightning. My body arched and shook. I can feel large amounts of blood leave my neck. Blood began to run from my mouth. My body settled, but the blood flow continued. My body twitched and grew cold. I began coughing weakly, small amounts of blood bubbled out my mouth with every cough. Trixie was looking down at me horrified. She appeared to be mumbling to herself. My vision grew fuzzy, grayish, almost blinding me. I can feel Trixie’s hand press against my neck, slowing down the bleeding. The bleeding continued to slow down to a steady trickle. I was trying not to pass out, the pain I was enduring plus the loss of blood made it only more difficult. Trixie lifted a bloody hand over my eyelids and closed my eyes. I was too weak to do anything about it. I couldn’t even muster the strength to reopen them. Before I knew it, I lost consciousness. My cold, bloody body laid out in a coffin-ready position on a bloody bed for two awaiting Trixie’s next deadly stunt.

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