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A new journey begins
This is going to be about a new charcter.
The Nameless Child
"Hey, hey kid, can you hear me?" A voice came from the darkness infront, who was it? What did they want? Come to think of it, where was this place and why was it so dark?
"I think he's waking up. Hey kid, can you hear me? Can you open your eyes?" The voice called again, open his eyes? Were they closed? It was so dark here, maybe he could just try, okay. 1, 2, 3, open. He could feel it, his eye lids were shifting, the dark was brightening up.
The sudden amount of light blinded him, how long had his eyes been closed? There were two people standing there, two children, two boys not much older then himself. But how old was he, no answer came, he had no memory of his age. One of the boys was standing infront of him, arm outstretched to help him up, he was smiling at him. Why was he smiling? Who was this person?
"Hey there, need a hand?" The boy said, still grinning ear to ear. He seemed to be a nice person, but maybe he was just trying to decieve him.
"Who are...You?" He said to the boy. Huh? He could speak, when did he learn to do that? Still no answer, he had no memory of speach.
"Me? My names Talen, this guy here is my brother Issac. What's your name?" The boy asked. So his name was Talen and this was his brother...Is that a sibling? Yes...But what was a sibling? Blood related individuals...How did he know this? Did it matter? No answer, he had no memory of it. What was his name? A simple question, it should have a simple answer, but what was it? What was the answer he was suppossed to give? What was his name?
"I don't...Remember." He replied, the kid with no name, no answer to such a simple question. Who was he? Why was he here? Why could he not remember?
"You don't know? You're a strange kid, how can you not remember your own name?" Talen responded, why was he questioning him? What difference could his name make? No answer, the nameless child just had no memory.
"Hey Talen, there's no time for chatter. If we don't get out here they'll find us." Issac called over to his younger brother, he'd just been standing there looking out to the side for the whole time the nameless childs eyes had been open.
"Okay brother, just give me a moment." There was something wrong, the world was blurry. Was it suppossed to be that way? No answer, no memory. It was getting blurrier, was it suppossed to do that? No answer, no memory. It was getting dark, was he going back to the world be saw before? No answer...No memory... "Hey, are you ok?" No answer...





Dante Efbo Deshar
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    commentCommented on: Sat Oct 02, 2010 @ 11:17pm
    man dude, your a good writer. keep it up. wink


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