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Past, Present, Future


Pieta Knowles
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Avatar Fanfic xD
((Huzzah! This is an Avatar the Last Air-bender Fanfic for you out there who love the show! I am not writing this alone my best friend Satius is helping me on the way and will write some of the parts of the story. Much love to you Sat! <3333))

A young woman named Ren was sitting on a rock near the ocean ,with long dark wavey hair and pure blue eyes, was staring out into the ocean. Then a she noticed some floating in the water. Quicky she ran into the water and dived in. She swam to the floating thing and found out it was a handsome man with dark brown hair tied back in a pony tail with a mustance. She dragged him to shore and waterbendid the water out of his thoart. Coughing her woke up looked up at her with his firely orange eyes. Many years have pased and that couple soon were married in the small isle of Crystalrite which became there home.

Those two soon found out that they would soon be parents to a pair of twins girls. Nine months passed and the day came. Soon the sun was highest in the sky the first twin was born they named her Vevina. Tweleve hours passed and the second was born went the moon was highest in sky and the named her Sachiko. The girls grew and at the age seven something amazing happend.


"Sister!" Yelled Sachiko from her small room at the top of house.

"What?" Exclaimed Vina from her room at the button of the stairs.

"Its time to go camping in the Forest of Ice!" Said Sachiko while bring down a large blue backpacket with a blue sleeping bag. She walked down the stairs and came into her twin sisters room. It was white with red dimond patten on the walls with a fuzzy black carpet. It had red, white and black furniture and two white tiki style beds. Her sister was packing her warm clothes and boots. "Are you ready?" Sachiko asked.

"Yes I am ready to go!" Said Vina and picked up her large red bag and red sleeping bad.

The two walked out of there family's home and went into the woods behind their home. These were not normal woods they had no trees but giant ice crystals coming up from the ground. The two walk to a small clearing and built a small igloo. Vina made the fire and Sachiko arranged the sleeping bags and took out the fish for dinner. When Sachiko passed the fish to be cooked to her sister she slipped and fell into the fire.

"SACHIKO!" Screamed Vina in fear and though her sister was burned.

Amazing her sister had bended the water to stop the flames.

"H-how d-did you do that!" Said Vina in shock.

"I-I don't k-know," Said Sachiko.

Years passed from this event and Sachiko became the village's most powerful water bender. Her sister was proud of her twin and the two were normaly never apart from each other. When the twins turn forteen is were our story truely begins.

"Vina, you think I should put my hair in pony tail or leave it down." Asks Sachiko as she looked in her red mirror in her room. Sachiko had grown into a beautiful young woman with long hair just like her mother. She had pale skin that remend people of ice. Her blue eyes looked like the color of the sea in winter. One streak of her hair was dyed Ice blue. She was wearing her normal outfit of a white and blue fleece shirt with white fur on the bottem helm. She wore a pair of blue pants and a pair of white boots.

"Up it flatters your face better," Says Vina who was writing in her small leather journal. Vina was also beautiful and look like her sister but her hair was put in two braids. Her skin was little darker than her sister and her bright orange eyes made her different than everyone else in the village expect her father. She wore what her sister was wearing since it was waterbending clothes. She had a piece of hair that was blue as well.

"Sachiko and Vina time for lessons," Says their mother Ren from the doujo.

Sachiko and Vina head down to the doujo their family owned for Sachiko's bending and their school lessons.

Sachiko was always ready to learn and loved learning with her sister.

Vina was the same and she loved watching her sister bend. Secerty we wish she could bend like her sister. Even though she couldn't bend she help her sister with the hard movements.

The twins face their mother Ren, Ren had a pair of blue glasses and her hair was a blackish graymix and was dressed like her daugthers. Near their mother who was Sachiko's master was their father Natsu. His hair was still dark black and was smiling at his daughters and wife. He never told his wife one thing before he joined the Water Nation he was a powerful general in the Fire Nation. He was happy that neither of the twins had his fire-bending powers.

"Sachiko, Vina, today a friend of yours is comming over and is going to learn some hard moves with us, I hope that's okay with you two." Says Ren and the door slide open as she spoke.

Sachiko's good friend Nen who she secerty liked came into the douje. He had braided black hair and was very handsome. He also was the most powerful male waterbender in the village.

"Hey Nen," says Vina and moved over so he could be in middle of group.

"Hello Vina and Sachiko," He says and got into a water-bending stance.

Sachiko and Vina took there stance.

Ren says, "Now we are gonig to learn how to make a water whip then when its about to hit your target change it to ice. Sachiko I will be your partner and Vina you will be Nen's partner."

Nen took his aim and created it the way Ren said and hit Vina hard. Vina fell over from the ice chuck and said, "Ow! Okay now its my turn to do the movements."

Vina and Nen switch places and Vina did the movements but some happend when she did it. Fire came out of her hands and caught Nen's pants on fire.

Nen screams and ran around in panic while Sachiko stopped the fire with her bending. Sachiko laughs, "Woah, you can firebend Vina. That's amazing!"

Vina was surprised and exclaims "Sorry Nen! I didn't mean too. But, that was cool!"

Natsu almost chokes when he saw his daughter bend. His eyes flash with worry and he sighs. He walks over to Vina, "Vina, It looks like you have my bending power of fire. I must train you for the time but you do know some moves from the train your mother has given to you. The lessons will be at the hour of four, you have much to learn."

After Natsu said those amazing words, Ren exclaims "Okay todays lesson is finshed, I think we have had euoght exciment for the day."

Vina and Sachiko turned and went upstairs to the top floor and went into Sachiko's room. Her room was like Vina's but with a blue carpet and blue walls. She had red and white furniture and a bed with a cover with the Water Nation symbol on it.

Vina sits on the bed and falls over on to the cover, "I couldn't fire bend last week or last year or anywhere else in my life!"

"I know! Isn't it just so amazing Vina!" says Sachiko extremely excited as she went on her bed and stood up holding her hand above her head almost victoriousely.

Then Vina came said to Sachiko "You what now we can bend together, even if it's not the same way."

"I know it's amazing, I was always hoping that you would be able to bend." Sachiko went on her stomach on her bed and smiles a purely sweet smile.

For the next few hours Vina and Sachiko talked to each other in the room talking about all of the new possibilities that were available now.

Right before four Sachiko says "Vina you're going to be the best firebender in the world, I can tell."
She then looks at a clock "It's time for you to go Vina, dad's waiting for you in the doujou by now."
"Have fun playing with your newfound powers!." calls out Sachiko as Vina left happy as could be.

Vina arrives at the doujou right as it was four.
"Welcome Vina, it's good to see that you made it on time.
I must warn you though that having firebending powers may not be as fun as you think, we live in a waterbending tribe afterall." says Natsu very seriousely.
"Oh but before we begin you need to change into those." Natsu points to a pile of bright red and orange clothes.
"Why do I have to? Couldn't my other clothes work as well?" asks Vina curious as to why her father asked her to do that.
"Because, water bending and firebending are two things completely different. If you wore your other clothes you could hurt youself until you learn to controll your powers, besides your new clothes are actually fire-proof."

Vina went to change into the clothes her father gave her, they were completely different from the waterbending clothes. Instead of a fleece shirt she had a bright red tanktop, and for her pants they were similar except that they could be brought up to the knee and cinched to not come loose but could come to her feet. There were no shoes for the practice even.

"Why are there no shoes father?" asks Vina keenly.
"Because unlike in water bending it is common for one to send fire through the feet."
"Oh"
"Now it's times to begin,
first of all if you accidently put something on fire you must do this....." Natsu went deeply in-depth about all the basics and even though he knew she was a fast learner like her sister he was surprised how easily and quickly she was able to replicate what he was doing. Natsu finally thought that in a way he liked that Vina had his firebending powers, but only for a moment.

"Vina, meet me again every day at four for your special lessons, you can still continue to go to your mother's lesson as well with Sachiko. Just make sure to always be here even if her lesson is running late. By the way, if you want I'll in fact let Sachiko come to the lessons." says Natsu very pleased at the end of the lesson.
Nodding and bowing with a grin a mile wide on her face Vina went back home to tell her sister all of the good news. Vina walks up the stairs to her sisters room and finds her sister reading a water-bending scroll.

"Sachiko, You can come to my fire bending lessons at 4," says Vina as she sits next to her sister.

"Okay, Hey look at these crazy water bending movements and stances," says Sachiko as she passes the scroll to her Vina.

Vina looks at the scroll, there were stances of men on the ground with one hand in the air and ones of them kneeing. "Inresting, I have never seen anyone do this before," says Vina and points to one of the kneeing stances.

Sachiko glances at it, "No wonder, Its a level five waterbending move that only a few can do." Sachiko grabs the scroll and puts it on one of her shelfs. She turns and faces Vina and asks, "What happend to your clothes?"

Vina turns around and tells "Its for my fire bending, there fire proof so I won't have any more problems with Guy's you like pants."

Sachiko blushes as she looks at her sisters feet, "No shoes either?"

Vina relpys and puts on a pair of black boots "Only when I am not bending because its easy to bend through the feet."

The two talked for hours untill it was time for dinner and they went down the wooden stair case to the kicthen. The smell of sea prunes and fresh trout with a little lemom fills the air. Vina takes her seat near her father and Sachiko sits near her mother. The meal was good as it smells even better. With some brown rice and a creme filled pastry for desert. But, then their was a knock at the door.

"We'll get it!" Yells the twins as they race to the door. Sachiko gets their first and opens the door. Their standing in the doorway is Commander Zhao, a powerful fire bending Commander.

He looks around and notices the Fire Nation clothes on Vina and the Water Nation clothes on Sachiko and says "Is this is house of Gerenal Natsu."

Their father walks from behind the twins and whispers to the twins, "Quickly get your mother and go out throught the Dojou." Then he turns to Zhao, "Yes its me Commander."

The twins nod and go get their mother in the kicthen. The threesome go through the Doujo of the house and wait outside, hiding near the bushes in the yard.

Yelling is in the air with screams from other families. The Fire Nations was attacking the town! Houses were on fire and benders were trying to save people but, the fire nation was too strong.

The twins turn to faces the road and run away from there mother. They run to the center of towns.

Sachiko uses the bay water to calm the flame while shes says to Vina, "You must bend the flames into the air to save the people of our village!"

Vina gasps and nods "Alright but, I have never used so much power before so be wanded." Vina takes her stance and lifts the fire into the air. Sweat pours down her face as she trys to keep it up.

Sachiko uses the bay water again and puts out the flames. She turns and hugs Vina and says "We did it!"

Vina stares and runs to their home while screaming, "FATHER!"

Sachiko turns to the house and gasps the two men were fighting and their father was losing. She caught up to her sister and uses Ice Whip on Zhao.

Zhao was caught off guard by the attack of the girl water bender and fell over. He sits up and throws a large fireball at Sachiko.

Niva bends the attack from Zhao and adds more fire to and hits him square in the chest. Niva yells to Sachiko "Take father to mother she may be able to heal his wounds."

Sachiko nods and picks her father and bring him to their mother.

Vina takes her stance and turns to Zhao, her face sercious as a teachers. "Leave our village with your soilders or you will be beaten."

Zhao snikers and then starts to laugh. "You think you scare me? A mere girl of mixed Fire Nation and Water Tribe? Your just a little fire bender that can't stop us, now go over their and help your water bending family which are a bunch of weak benders by the way."

Vina's eyes flashed with anger her eyes changes and glow pure red. Her body starts to glow an eerie red. Suddenly a huge stream of reddish orange light comes of out her hands and when it passed by all the Fire Nation soilders fall over with burns all over there body.

Zhao eyes stare with a combo of fear and shock. He thinks, She's the Fire Spirt Recanation.

The light hits him hard as Zhao falls over, his left arm is baldy injured. He yells to the soilders "Lets get out of this village!"

The soilders scramble and run to their ships. They leave as quickly as lighting strikes and starts a small fire.

Vina returns to normal and she falls over from using so much power.

As that happends Sachiko falls to her knees and turns from her mother, "He is dead."

Ren walks over to Sachiko and hugs her, "He was proud of you and your sister. But now he is in a better place now and their is nothing more I could do."

A tear comes down Sachiko's face and she starts to cry. As the tear hits the ground, something else strange happends, Sachiko glows a light shade of blue. Slowly she changes, blow and white fur grows on her body, her eyes become the same shade of blue as her body, A tail and wolf ears grow. Sachiko becomes a blue wolf and runs from her mother too the town square.

Ren gasps and yells after the wolf, "Sachiko!!!!"

Sachiko howls and runs around the village. She then runs to the highest hill and howls for her father's soul. The howl echos as the animals of the forest make noises to repy. She then sniffs the air and turns back to her village. Running again, she passes the village people whose night has turned from normal to rare, her nose goes to work. Sachiko finds her sister on the ground near the statue of an waterbending master. Sniffing as her sister, she howls softly and trys to wake up her sister.





User Comments: [6]
Satius
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Sun Feb 05, 2006 @ 01:19am


Continue the story GOP <333
I love it


Satius
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Sun Feb 05, 2006 @ 05:31am


We've been very busy with this idea xD
We've already written so much @_@


Pieta Knowles
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Sun Feb 05, 2006 @ 03:42pm


YES! xD But its wonderful!


Satius
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Mon Feb 06, 2006 @ 02:57am


I know xD
You should put the next part into another part of your journel and label it Avatar Fanfic part 2


The Lady Rhea
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Sun Feb 12, 2006 @ 04:13pm


What show is this now? I've never heard of it XDDD


Satius
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Sun Feb 12, 2006 @ 06:56pm


It has to do with our own characters right now and it's Avatar: The Last Airbender x3


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