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I'm going to be puting my poetry in it ples read and coment
Black Diamond
A heart once beat but now it lays still. Once warm now frozen. Was soft with love now hardened with hatered. Red no longer but scorn black from betrayal. No longer with the man but in a case of diamond. Severing as its own prison. No longer can it feel love, compassion, or life. It only suffers with hate, dismay, and death. The man once blessed with a loving heart has changed wicked and twisted. Some have come to try and claim this new black diamond yet all have failed. Those who do try to take this prize and live to tell the tale warn others of this new monster. They say he has turned into a monster with scales as black as night, eyes darkened as if staring into nothing, claws and teeth stained with blood, and wings dark as if scorched. His layer littered with bones of those hes eaten. It is said only one of a heart of gold can claim this diamond and end the mans curse yet none have dared try. So the monster remains in his cave waiting for the next person to try and steal his heart away.






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vampiregirl_night_13
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commentCommented on: Sat Jul 02, 2011 @ 01:34am
so beautiful..the words..and imagery...and sad but thats what makes it beautiful..sorry if thats confusing..you have a talent with words ^-^


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