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In the mist of good thought
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No Low, My oprhan go.
Hello my name is Mariona
I'm an oprhan
I live in a room with many childern
Our Overseer is cruel and harsh
She whips us everday
Even if we said our prays and never
open our mouths.
One day she came in
whip in hand
ready to beat
whoever she can
Then before i knew i was her target
the whip slashing and ripping my flesh
I thought to myself is this how Jesus felt
when they tortuered him until death?
No it couldnt be, for i am not God.
Before she could slash me one more time
I Jumped up in a furry!
Grabbed a hold of her wrinkled wrist
Twisting as hard as i could to make her
drop her weapon.
She gasped at my anger and furry
She wanted control, she recieved it
retrieving her beating ram, the others helped me
They jumped, beat, gaged, and killed....
Looking at what they've done they gasped in awe and
surprised relief....relief...we looked around at one another
"Who would take care of us?" We thought out loud...
It came to us..we're free we can do whatever we want now...
Leaving out of the ghostly oprhanage, we said our goodbyes and separated...None of us looked back...

User Comments: [2]
Metal -----mr_e-----
Community Member

Sat Nov 07, 2009 @ 08:35pm

Is this real or is it just a poem?

Community Member

Mon Jan 04, 2010 @ 03:29am

Wow, i like it :'D

I like the fact the i can see the scenes in my head, very good! :3

User Comments: [2]
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