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Alice in Wonderland: The Escape
This is an RP idea that I've come up with. I would like for all those who read it to post their opinions about it and, if you have any, advice that could make it better. Well, here it is:

We all know the story of Alice in Wonderland...well, we know what we believe to be the story: Alice, bored of listening to her sister talk, sees a white rabbit and follows it into a rabbit hole, thus ending up in a world that both defies and questions logic. After her exploration of Wonderland, she wakes up from what is apparently nothing more than a dream.

...but was it really a dream?


Wonderland wasn’t just a dream. It’s very much real. And guess what? Alice wasn’t the first person to have fallen down that rabbit hole, nor would she be the last. Contrary to the story, however, Alice never made it out. She's very much alive, but has been trapped in Wonderland for years. By Wonderland's time, five have passed. By the real world's time, a century and a half, plus a few extra years. In other words, the twenty-first century. She was the last person to have fallen through the rabbit hole...until today. The Rabbit Hole has opened up again; this time, however, there's more than one. Several other people will fall through these rabbit holes, and they will soon find out the truth...the truth of why Alice stayed in Wonderland...the truth to why the rabbit hole hasn't been open...the truth to what has happened to Wonderland all this time.

There is now only one question for you to answer: as the White Rabbit passes by, will you follow it to the hole?


There. This is what's happened to Wonderland, and the truth to why Alice stayed:

But why, then, hasn't anyone else fallen through the rabbit hole? Because she sealed it shut in an attempt to make sure that no one else would fall through the hole. Why, you may ask? Because there is a dark force in the very core of Wonderland that is both ancient and malevolent, a demon of great power and of void sealed away and put into a deep slumber by the very characters of the story. It was when Alice entered Wonderland that it stirred and almost escaped. If not for Alice sealing the rabbit hole shut, the demon would have escaped. What's more, Alice - along with the rest of the characters - sealed the demon once more in its prison...but it wouldn't fall into slumber. It decided to wait for the right opportunity to break its chains and crash through its prison walls. Years have passed in Wonderland, and the very prison and chains that they placed on it are starting to weaken. Alice knew that they alone wouldn't be able to do the job again, so she re-opened the rabbit hole in hopes to attract anyone who could help them keep the demon sealed...or to even kill it off.

Well?






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II_Crazy_Muffin_II
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commentCommented on: Sun Oct 11, 2009 @ 10:49pm
wow thts realy good and il alice in wonderland i like it xd


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