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The road we walk
Mostly poetry... some other stuff
Suicide
My room is where I lie, staring at the ground.

I'm being eaten alive by the demons that reside within
The devils that pray,
The angels that sin.

Yearning for an ending too far gone to begin
Waiting for you,
This feeling within.

There I am, lying alone gun beside my head
I am forever gone,
Though I will never be dead.

Will I be found, or will I be forever missing
People won't ask where or how,
Through the sound of no weeping.






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HeartShapeBruises
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commentCommented on: Tue Nov 22, 2005 @ 05:04pm
oh i do love love that,so many suicide poem are so self absorbed but i like how it shows real lonelyness inside and total self doubt.

i like the thought of "Through the sound of no weeping"

oh and " I'm being eaten alive by the demons that reside within
The devils that pray,
The angels that sin"

******** love that ,excellently put heart

but you know if that was your suicide then you would be found and forever missed and the sound of weeping would be deafning blaugh


commentCommented on: Wed Nov 23, 2005 @ 07:40pm
Oh my god!
I love your poem!
It's so....so.....Words can not desribe it! heart



FullMetalKittie
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moderne
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commentCommented on: Thu Nov 24, 2005 @ 03:38am
As you know, the subject is a little cliched...
but I like it, 'cause it's not all angsty and stuff.

I LOVE THE WAY YOU WRITE STUFF, DUDE.
It's so cool and stuff.
heart


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