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Monochrome Battle Round 1
Scoring: Round 1
Fried Squash
Queeny’s Results: 74/100
FM’s Results: 76/100
Salad’s Results:
Mem’s Results: 93/100
Guest Judge Results (Iokia): 86/100
Temporary Replacement (Maramas): 91/100
Score Average: 84/100
The Bagel
Queeny’s Results: 89.5/100
FM’s Results: 77.5/100
Salad’s Results:
Mem’s Results: 87/100
Guest Judge Results (Iokia): 86/100
Temporary Replacement (Maramas): 94/100
Score Average: 87/100
Dr. Voxx
Queeny’s Results: 78/100
FM’s Results: 78/100
Salad’s Results:
Mem’s Results: 69/100
Guest Judge Results (Iokia): 67/100
Temporary Replacement (Maramas): 76/100
Score Average: 74/100

In depth!

FM's Scoring
Squash
Adherence to the rules- 5/5
Flow- 16/25
Texture- 20/25
Balance- 18/25
Overall Appeal- 17/20
Total Score- 76/100
I like the textures you used all the way down to the leg areas, which seem a bit plain in comparison. The socks bring in too much white compared to the scatteredness that you have going on everywhere else. I also don't understand the knife being there and I think it would have looked better with out it.

Bagel
Adherence to the rules- 5/5
Flow- 18/25
Texture- 17.5/25
Balance- 19/25
Overall Appeal- 18/20
Total Score- 77.5/100
I like the way you made the bulkiness of the helmet and belt look good with this avatar, I am a bit disappointed that you didn't manage to distribute your textures throughout your avi, I think if you added the tiger pants for the legs, I would have given you a much better score. The tv head and shirt are great with this avi, I just wish you got the sort of texture down near you legs too.

Voxx
Adherence to the rules- 5/5
Flow- 20/25
Texture- 18/25
Balance- 17/25
Overall Appeal- 18/20
Total Score- 78/100
I don't like the double hat thing you got going on nor do I like the fascinator for it is a different texture compared to the smoothness the rest of you avi exhibits. It seems to me that your avi in comparison to the others is by far the most simple. Simple can be a good thing. I like the way you distributed you colours evenly throughout your avi, without being overly complex.

Queeny's Scoring
Squash:
Flow- 17/25
Texture- 20/25
Balance- 14/25
Overall Appeal- 18/20
Total Score- 69/100 +5
I really don't like those lidless demon shoes, they tend to make ones feet area look all the more void than they usually do... Also, the texture is flowing quite nicely, along with balance of things until you hit the legs, it doesn't seem like it fits totally with the rest of the avatar.

Bagel:
Flow- 20/25
Texture- 20/25
Balance- 24.5/25
Overall Appeal- 20/20
Total Score- 84.5/100 +5
I really like this, I'm used to see more black of monochromes from you so this is rather a fresh look for me. I think what I love most about this avatar is how you used the TV head, much love for the TV head. Though the skirt you're wearing almost chunks it up a bit, other than that I really like it.

Doc:
Flow- 16/25
Texture- 17/25
Balance- 20/25
Overall Appeal- 20/20
Total Score- 73/100 +5
It's sort of chunky on the top area, with the double hat look. Though I really do like the jacket, which I usually don't so I do like this. Don't really have any comments other than I like it. Lol

Memz' Scoring
Fried Squash
Adherence to the rules- 5/5
Flow- 23/25
Texture- 25/25
Balance- 22/25
Overall Appeal- 18/20
Total Score- 93/100
Comment: Wonderful texture, few things are: Would be great to see maybe some earrings on here to cover up that cut into the body and also a white belt too or white pin for your chest. Kicked off the contest well in my books.

The Bagel
Adherence to the rules- 5/5
Flow- 22/25
Texture- 20/25
Balance- 23/25
Overall Appeal- 17/20
Total Score- 87/100
Comment: I like how it was different and really white more then black. Just something about, The skirt looks really odd, mostly because there is a lot of dark in that area so maybe the better option was to use the tennis skirt, also adding, probably, more texture there. A black pin would have looked nice, although yeah I know the item limit is there. It too is a nice start.

Voxx
Adherence to the rules- 5/5
Flow- 16/25
Texture- 13/25
Balance- 20/25
Overall Appeal- 15/20
Total Score- 69/100
Comment: It is a good monochrome; don’t get me wrong just next to the others it didn’t look like an amazing monochrome. Always room for improvement =P I’d love to see some white on the upper part of your legs, and then less white on your chest. Good luck.

Mara's Scoring

Squa
Flow- 24/25
Texture- 23/25
Balance- 21/25
Overall Appeal- 18/20
Total Score- 86/100 +5
Comments: The center kind of descends into chaos for me, especially considering the exposed leg, which is relatively untextured. The danklets also do some funky things to the shape of things.

Bagel
Flow- 25/25
Texture- 23/25
Balance- 22/25
Overall Appeal- 19/20
Total Score- 89/100 +5
Comments: The areas of concentrated super texture, like the laces, shirt and hat, are a little odd at first, but once you look at it a while, they start to work. I love the pokey shapes going on with all your little wings and such.

Voxxie
Flow- 18/25
Texture- 20/25
Balance- 19/25
Overall Appeal- 14/20
Total Score- 71/100 +5
Comments: The layering of the multipants over the jacket is awkward. The head is really flat except the fascinator, as compared to the middle especially. The shades aren't spread very well, with the middle gray at the very top and knees, but then nowhere else.

Kia's Scoring
Squash:
Adherence to the rules- 5/5
Flow- 23/25
Texture- 23/25
Balance- 20/25
Overall Appeal- 15/20
Total Score- 86/100
While the texture on this one is fabulous, the feet/legs lack a bit. Also, while this is technically brilliant, the aesthetics suffer a bit (it's not as pretty to look at).

Bagel:
Adherence to the rules- 5/5
Flow- 21/25
Texture- 18/25
Balance- 24/25
Overall Appeal- 18/20
Total Score- 86/100
Very well balanced, and quite pleasing to the eye, if not as complex. The textures here are pretty well balanced, as is the shape.

Voxx:
Adherence to the rules- 5/5
Flow- 15/25
Texture- 19/25
Balance- 16/25
Overall Appeal- 12/20
Total Score- 67/100
This avatar is pretty blocky. There are easy to note chunks of items, and the transitions just aren't there. Looks as if black, white, and gray items were just put together instead of planned out.





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