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Hello fellow gaians i have re done Andy Ricky and here is my prologue please enjoy and tell me exactly what you think good or bad. I want my writing to be great so please help.

‘My name, like me, doesn’t exist, or didn’t till I saw her. She was young, too young, but she would grow where I would not. It was not beauty that attracted me; it was the kindness I saw in her. I thought she would change over the years and not in a good way and therefore loose my interest. She did change over time but in a way that kept my interest.’ Adrian thought.

It all began when Adrian went out to feed at a place called ‘South of the Boarder’. There are many kinds of vampires, each type in turn acts and feeds different. Some of these types are day walkers and others are not. Adrian’s type of Vampires in the years after Dracula’s rein, have developed methods to be able to withstand the sun, holy water, and crosses. Adrian was feeding on a young beautiful Mexican woman in the shadows when a family with a small straggling child walked by the child saw through the shadows to where he stood blood running down his chin. The young girl smiled and waved. The little girl fell as she stumbled behind her family and watching him happily.

“You will be mine one day little one.” He whispered to himself.

“Come Andy Ricky.” A young woman, who must have been her mother said.

“Andy Ricky such a beautiful name, now do not get lost little one,” He said “I shall follow you but you seem to be in an already healthy environment.”

“Hansom man I will see you again,” He heard the little girl whisper “I will marry you one day.”

“As you have said you will” Adrian said allowed.

The little girl scrambled off to catch up with her family and turned only once more to wave him good bye.