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Just thoughts that felt they needed to be seen.
Your biggest pretend
Just another person,
Walking through the crowd,
Just another smiling face,
Until you look deep down.

A smile is all she has,
But she let's no one know,
She wears the same mask everyday.
She'll never let it show.

People move around her,
But she herself stands still,
To her time is endless,
She has nothing to fufill.

Locked in her room,
She sits smiling in a chair,
Looking like a porcelain doll,
Emits a lifeless stare.

The streets may be flowing,
But she always walks alone,
Faces passing by her,
Her presence goes unknown.

She acts like there's nothing wrong,
she doesn't need a friend.
She thinks she'll never love,
but that is her biggest pretend.






User Comments: [4]
Hunter_Strife
Community Member





Sun Oct 30, 2005 @ 03:29am


This is for all of your poems. I love them. They seem so real and relate to real life. I really like them, maybe because I have a similar writing style as you. But, I totally think you should continue. Have you gotten published?


BalmungX
Community Member





Sat Nov 05, 2005 @ 03:59am


WOW! nice but is it containing you?


.Pebbled.
Community Member





Sat Nov 05, 2005 @ 04:18am


Wow that's such a beautiful poem surprised
I only fool around with poetry. :]


XxMusikJunkiexX
Community Member





Sat Nov 05, 2005 @ 05:20pm


stop being such an angsty teenager.


User Comments: [4]
 
 
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