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this is my journal of poetry. i hope u like the entries. please comment oh and make sure u start the story from the beginning
losing my mind
{verse 1}
thinking this thinking that always question myself
stacking thoughts in my mind like stacking books on shelves
confusing words, brain surge, not knowing how i feel
hallucination, perpetration making it seem so real
resting to question intercession thinking im out my mind
looking at an old clock im running out of time
try to think of the future but cant leave the past behind
dreams dont make sense to me im losing my mind

{chorus}
losing my mind{thinking this, hearing that voice in my head}
losing my mind{coming at you from every side with every rhyme}
losing my mind{lost in thought, lost inside, stabbed from behind}
losing my mind{these thoughts im thinking make me go out my mind}

{verse 2}
going psycho in denial this is bad for my health
this thought inside wont let me think for myself
i cant wake up, im staring at the glow of the light
battling against the bad thoughts putting up a good fight
wanna wake up and take control of my mind
i wanna think for myself before i run out of time
dont want to think these bad thoughts, want to leave it behind
want to forget about these thoughts before im losing my mind

{chorus} x2
losing my mind{thinking this, hearing that voice in my head}
losing my mind{coming at you from every side with every rhyme}
losing my mind{lost in thought, lost inside, stabbed from behind}
losing my mind{these thoughts im thinking make me go out my mind}

{bridge}
this voice inside will try to control me
i gotta make sure that it never gets hold of me
im fighting back, im seeing the light
i'll take my mind back and make everything right

{chorus} x2
losing my mind{thinking this, hearing that voice in my head}
losing my mind{coming at you from every side with every rhyme}
losing my mind{lost in thought, lost inside, stabbed from behind}
losing my mind{these thoughts im thinking make me go out my mind}



they can trigger me, but they'll never figure me out
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-BlackKiss16
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commentCommented on: Fri Nov 14, 2008 @ 11:34pm
I love how the rymes come out and such. You are one of the best poets I've ever seen. ^_^


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