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Stuff that my love should read.....
No Longer Hidden
My Anger consumes me
Burning inside
I SCREAM at no one
NO MORE WILL I HIDE

With fists of anger
And hands of Fury
I will NOT
LET THIS ANGER CONSUME ME

Full of pride
Head held high
My pain enduring
I know will soon die

Conciousness slipping
My head inside
I WILL
NO LONGER HIDE!






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poco~cadenza
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commentCommented on: Sun Oct 30, 2005 @ 04:10am
Awesome!!!! Wish I could write like that....I stick to singing and drawing tho...oh and violin. that too lol


commentCommented on: Wed Nov 16, 2005 @ 06:18am
Nice feeling and emotion, though you use the word anger twice in a stanza... sweatdrop



Zurah
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