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AKA DIARY Hey look at my diary.It has boring stories =.=. just look.I add some more if you want ^_^


ll shun ll
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My favorite poem:
FIRST LOVE

ne'er was struck before that hour
With love so sudden and so sweet.
Her face it bloomed like a sweet flower
And stole my heart away complete.

My face turned pale, a deadly pale.
My legs refused to walk away,
And when she looked what could I ail
My life and all seemed turned to clay.

And then my blood rushed to my face
And took my eyesight quite away.
The trees and bushes round the place
Seemed midnight at noonday.

I could not see a single thing,
Words from my eyes did start.
They spoke as chords do from the string,
And blood burnt round my heart.

Are flowers the winter's choice
Is love's bed always snow
She seemed to hear my silent voice
Not love appeals to know.

I never saw so sweet a face
As that I stood before.
My heart has left its dwelling place
And can return no more.






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lover_so_sweet93
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comment Commented on: Thu Aug 07, 2008 @ 03:45am
whoa i like this poem its good


comment Commented on: Tue Aug 12, 2008 @ 05:28pm
i love it!!! ^ ^



Lolita_Lamperouge
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InConstantPain1
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comment Commented on: Wed Aug 20, 2008 @ 03:48am
ur an amazing poet!!
wow


comment Commented on: Tue Sep 02, 2008 @ 01:57am
Hey, your a really good poem writer you could win money i loved it...

steals poem.....jk heart heart



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Clip-Doodle
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comment Commented on: Thu Nov 20, 2008 @ 01:37am
Wow dude your like the best Poem maker ever those are like awsome man.


comment Commented on: Sat Nov 22, 2008 @ 03:20am
The poem right above, the one that melts my heart, I will always remember.
Never have I seen such a beautiful poem, like the dew on a lily at midnight.
A geashia with a face so pale like snow, with plum red lips and blue eyes.
Could never amount to the warmth this brings to my soul.
My thoughts went stone cold, ran from my head, and my mind went blank.
Never such a thrilling thing, even watching a glissando of a white gold harp could not bring the joy of this beauty.


- As you can see I am an amature <3-

- Chloe XD



Chloe Noelle Joy
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StrawberryTeaBubbles
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comment Commented on: Sat Dec 13, 2008 @ 09:07am
i love it panda. i wish i was a good poet like u!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

merry christmas anyway


comment Commented on: Thu Apr 02, 2009 @ 05:46pm
Wow, thats really awesome!



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Dunce Cap
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comment Commented on: Sat May 09, 2009 @ 09:24am
I like poems that don't rhyme better, or if they're funny. BUT OMFG... good? I suck at writing poems, so who am I to judge you?


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