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Forsaken (epilogue poem to my short story The Heartless)
Left alone in darkness
I am lost in pain
Accompanied by distress
I have nothing to explain

I would be lonely
If I could only feel
I look around madly
I wonder if this is real

I reach into emptiness
And try to grasp the air
I am left in loneliness
To wallow in my despair

I am here because I sin
I am here because I bled
There is nothingness within
This is where I go when I'm dead.






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milk_n_cookies_yummy
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commentCommented on: Sat Dec 27, 2008 @ 07:19pm
wow thats really good


commentCommented on: Sat Jan 03, 2009 @ 07:06am
Again the same dark feeling.

I love poems like this.
It is very real...which is something I havnt been able to find.

It really makes me want to read more of your work.



mizzCarrieLynn
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