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anime and such
part 2 of my story called Koi!!!! Enjoy!!!!
As koi kept on getting ready for school, combing her hair then putting it in a pony tail with braids, trying her best to like as animeish as posable. (spelling errors..deal with it....>.< wink then she put on a chinese style top, deep red with lines going down to the botton. then wore a shirt witha belt loop going sideways, then completed the look with earrings, and a black ribbon around her neck. "there..finally now it's time for school..." She sighs looking at herself in the mirror, well heck, at least i look hot. heh.."yuki walked in..aka her sister. " are you done looking at yourself yet?" Koi gave yuki her best death glare."yuki put her hands on her hips,"you know...that never works on me.."

"...."

"whatever just drive me to school already!!!"

yuki laughed.."wow..you actally didn't yell as loud today, whats up?"

Koi just looked confused.." the heck? what? do you want me to yell at you or something?"

Yuki begin to walk towards the door, stopped, then leaned on the wall"Nah..thats not it, it seems almost odd..thats all.."

"......"

"i don't get you"

they both head towards the car, before yuki gets in she turns to Koi" did you get a case yet?"

Koi blinks "oh yeah that.. no not yet, YOUR the famous one not me, i always get the lame ones..."

Yuki smiles" give it time Koi, poeple are going to start to notice you soon"

"Hn"

My sis gets in the car, i follow. as far as those cases go i should explain. you see...
my sis is a well know detetive(again spelling is bad, deal with it --_---)



ok..thats the end of part 2. writers note: random fact in story, Koi calls Yuki sis but she ISN'T her sister..confused?? XD i will explain that in later chapters.. when i get around to it.. i can t tell yet if people like it... this is like a hobby of mine now. my fist time making a fanfiction i gress.. so...be nice biggrin whee






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Lord_Kasark
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commentCommented on: Tue Jun 10, 2008 @ 03:46pm
nice so far the story line sort of makes sense


commentCommented on: Sat Aug 02, 2008 @ 11:26pm
ill be your love suckra heart



lover trevor
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