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Unique Illusions of the Mind
Thoughts, Dreams Hopes and Fears Joy and Sadness... Welcome to my Illusion
Dead Letters

Series 02

Walking out in the mouth of may
I find something different today.

The birds are singing
The trees dance as they sway to a beat long lost, time to far gone.

The sky a light blue
The clouds a patch of fluff.

My heart..It beats?
Who would have thought

That someone like me could live,
When you did not.






User Comments: [1]
Chaos-Angel05
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Wed Jun 04, 2008 @ 05:56am


Well, i must admit at first, the meaning of this poem was a bit confusing. But twist at the end really made up for it. So my best suggestion would be to kind of change up the scene you portray in this poem to better suit the mood


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