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Dead Letters Series 02 Walking out in the mouth of may I find something different today. The birds are singing The trees dance as they sway to a beat long lost, time to far gone. The sky a light blue The clouds a patch of fluff. My heart..It beats? Who would have thought That someone like me could live, When you did not.

Posted by: Holistic Tue Jun 03, 2008 @ 04:30am

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Chaos-Angel05
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Wed Jun 04, 2008 @ 05:56am

Well, i must admit at first, the meaning of this poem was a bit confusing. But twist at the end really made up for it. So my best suggestion would be to kind of change up the scene you portray in this poem to better suit the mood

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