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LIFE & LOVE OF TIM M.
My life sucks and i want to die!my friends deserte me daily. And i feel like my heart has been ripped into so many little pieces that they all could be thread through the eye of a needle. She is tearing me appart at the seam!
Passion

the only thing i see when i look into a mirror,
is a loud screaming fear.
a fear of passion will one day die,
all you feel if you see them is you can fly.
but the love you give is never repaid,
it is just moved to the one they have obeyed.
that makes you feel like a shadow in a bright existence,
when your together and she buing him up you feel absence.
the absence of your passion for her that is clear as mud,
you just run form life try and find peace in a rose bud.
you then realize that the only place where peace resides is with her,
but finding her is such a blur.
you have ran so long you forgot your goal,
wait, time is still and you look into your soul.
finding where she is you run,
ran to find her sit in a corner crying, holding a gun.
you hold her in your arms and dicide i will carry the wait of the world that is on her shoulders,
carrying it through swomps and over boulders.
finding just sitting there with her saying that the path isnt clear,
but where ever it leads i will be there.
saying i love you and i always will,
i will be here forever to refil,
that glass that is half full,
ill even fight the 8000 ton bull.
but the passion will never die if you are there.
have a great life and just know i will love you and will always care.






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dark buffy
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commentCommented on: Thu May 08, 2008 @ 06:07am
wow i wonder who u are talking about??? wink


commentCommented on: Fri Jun 27, 2008 @ 05:02pm
Cool poem. ur pretty good at this.



Disasters Love
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commentCommented on: Sat Jun 28, 2008 @ 12:44am
thats really good ^^ you're wonderful at writing poems <3


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