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Twilightlluv666's Journal Mostly crap about nothing! again... i might write stories and poems but usually i'm too lazy or busy with life to do it.


twilightluv666
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Drowning Within Myself
I hide amongst the million lies
Looking past the watching eyes
I reach to find my speacial retreat
Hiding, waiting just for me.

I put the metal against my head
And think back to the days that are dead
The days when the sun was always out
When we used to run about.

I couldn't take it
I thought i was drowning
Now i feel my heartbeat pounding

I c**k the gun, and pull the trigger
This
Is
goodbye





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VVVUUVVV
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comment Commented on: Mon Feb 04, 2008 @ 09:48pm
I remember this one! You kinda fixed the ending..a little smile


comment Commented on: Mon Feb 04, 2008 @ 10:09pm
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh she s dead surprised



luismatute
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II Scarlet Petals II
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comment Commented on: Sun Feb 24, 2008 @ 06:46pm
See!
This is why Mrs.Sheer thinks that your you know what!
You people are sooo weird...o_0
Plus you got a Kayla kitty and rose!
Im sooo jealous!
Maybe I should ask my parents or aunt if I can get one for my bday/Christmas/New Year's (both)!
I bet they would probably say no though...

P.S.
What the heck is luismatute comenting on it???
Its freaky how he stalks people...*shudders*
whtever...


comment Commented on: Mon Feb 25, 2008 @ 10:44pm
GOLD!!!!!!!!!!!11



VVVUUVVV
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Kai Secth
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comment Commented on: Mon Mar 10, 2008 @ 04:03pm
ninja


comment Commented on: Sun Apr 06, 2008 @ 03:17am
And after you pull the trigger, guess what goes everywhere?! RAW ******** RED MEAT! xd



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DMP4
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comment Commented on: Mon May 12, 2008 @ 09:07pm
So this is the guidance office culprit?
is it in iambic pentameter?!?! jk
hey so yeah....just realized i can get gold for posting in my journal XD


comment Commented on: Mon May 12, 2008 @ 09:08pm
is that our luis from school ?!?!?! confused



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