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Suroku's Journal
This journal depicts my life in writing, I may put some things, I may not, it depends on the subject. But enjoy it anyway.
This is an original poem by me, I thought it up just a moment ago:

I cannot imagine the days to come
When I feel so empty as this
Like a creek without water to humble itself,
Like a man without his love's kiss.
So be it that I lose faith in myself
So much that I crave for self-disaster
Only to drown in my own pity,
And dub Fate as my mortal Master.
And woe is me! that my people dear disappear before my eyes
Dissapating, Vanishing, Leaving,
So far away that they will not hear my cries.
And what become of I, that helpless little youngster?
Why, I become the earth's first Monster.






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Sexi_blu_Alita
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commentCommented on: Fri Dec 28, 2007 @ 07:08am
woh....ur amazing.....meow XP we havent rped in a while lol

beth:u shuld read alitas poems.
libby:beth we dont kno him we arnt supposed to be in this comment


commentCommented on: Sat May 10, 2008 @ 01:31am
Whoah. Thats REALLY good. I wish I could write like that!



Makie134
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Dajex_666
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commentCommented on: Mon Sep 29, 2008 @ 06:30am
That is so beautiful....... I'm literally crying. Wow. I wish I could write poems......


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