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it's time to be a big girl now... and big girls don't cry....
THE RAG DOLL STORY (final episode :shock:)
HI the story is the first comment that will be post by janez couse I can't put the faces sad

I had tear out my heart and put a clock instead... now I'll wait.
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    Janez 21
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    Tue Dec 25, 2007 @ 11:12pm


    IMMPORTANT: HEY HEY! EVERYBODY WE ARE A BIT LATE JEJE sweatdrop SO LETS SAY THAT IN THE STORY IS 24 TH OF DECEMBER JEJE sweatdrop

    tefa wakes up

    tefa: awww what..?? eek OMG what are we doing here we have until midnight to get back my heart!!!

    when tefa looks around everybody is mounted in deers and ready to go

    tefa: confused when did u..?

    angel: tefa we have been waiting for u like for 2 hours

    tefa: scream and WHY THE ******** U DIDN'T WAKE ME UP!!!!

    yuki: becouse u look cute when u sleep and we never saw a sleeping fairy before mew! 3nodding

    tefa: burning_eyes ok lets go

    angel: pirate to sohee's base!!!

    so tefa, Mr. romantic santa, rebel, yuki and some santa servants went threw the sky monted in deers with one mission in mind.. CHUM CHUM gets tefa's heart back cool

    yuki: (looking at the narration) and our nanny imi 4laugh

    tefa: yuki u too???

    yuki: hey! u can't blame a cat for likeing cookies, milk and a good night story whee

    rebel: don't forget the warm blancket xp

    angel: and the good night kiss ! idea

    boys: yay!!!

    tefa: ok we are doomed talk2hand

    in soohe's base

    imi: kids wake up I think something is coming

    soohe: ammm auuu

    public_enemy: what could that be??

    soohe and public_enemy: eek santa.... YAYYY WOOOOW SANTA SANTA

    soohe: lets go out side!!!

    soohe's group went running outside... in pijamas

    imi: wait kids put your sweaters u are gonna get a cold! whee

    public:en: awww ok nanny

    soohe's group went running out side.. in pijamas and worm big sweaters

    janez: (almost in a ice cube) ooo u ... guys I know u care for me and ...

    soohe and public_enemy: wooow santa!!!!! woooww

    janez: crying awww guys please don't leave me here!!!!!!

    soohe: wait a min..

    public_ enemy: that is not santa

    rebel: no! we are tefa's team!!!

    yuki: we are here for the heart now give up!!

    soohe team take out their pijamas

    reader: OMG THE ARE ALL NAKED!!! WOOOWWW

    writter (me): don't b stupid people!

    readers: awww sad but look at their clothes eek what a style!!! direct from milan wooooww!! rofl

    writter: janez.... stressed

    writter of the meanwhiles (janez): what! they look cool!

    wrtittter: ok lets go on with the story


    an enourmous fight has started, everyone fight, including janez that was cured wiith imi hot choocolate and mashmelows.
    After an hour the only ones in feet were janez, soohe, public_enemy,on tefa, rebel and angel

    tefa: mew mew tefa! metamorphosiss!!!

    tuu ti ri ri tu ti tim tin tun (15 min of anoyng transformation music)

    tefa: mew mew style mew mew grace mew mew power on your face!

    janez: tefa... stare

    tefa what! 4laugh

    janez: u relly gotta stop watching mew mew power (tokyo mew mew)

    tefa: arrrg rrrmiaaaw!

    tefa tears soohe's and public_ enemy's outfit

    janez: nouuu my collection!! gonk

    reader: so they are naked biggrin
    tefa: NO stare
    reader: awww sad


    Janez 21
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    Tue Dec 25, 2007 @ 11:13pm


    soohe: buaaaaa crying I'm cold!!! imi!!!!

    imi: is ok, is ok, now little girl why don't u give up and give tefa her heart

    soohe: (suddenly serius) no.

    imi: a? whats the matter

    soohe: the heart is staying, this is a fight I'm not willing to lose.

    janez: crying O soohe I'm so proud u finally become a great evil girl!!

    imi: why soohe, why are u doing all this evil

    soohe: becouse... becouse.... I wanna... dhygfg

    imi: what? sory darling I can't hear u clearly u want a what?

    soohe: a dogghjehfgefu

    imi: a dog confused u want a dog??

    soohe: I WANT A DOLL OK! scream AND TEFA IS PERFECT FOR THAT JOB!!!

    public_enemy: hey! u say we were going to share her! domokun

    soohe: yes, but I'm going to have tea with her first! stare

    janez: OMG can we go on with the fight please! talk2hand

    tefa: come on team is 11:45 we got 15 min!! gonk

    rebel: aaaa!!!!! have this janez!!

    rebel injure ajnez, blood comes out of his mouth eyes nose everywere!!!! eek

    janez: tefa.. stare this is a children story
    tefa: ok, ok sory to much blood, I narraeted again


    rebel injured janez, a deep wound, u can guess becouse of the red spot that was getting larger in his stomage

    rebel: last shoot!!!

    tefa: ooh!(gasp) janez! NO! scream

    tefa run to janez!!

    angel, soohe and public_enemy: no?

    rebel: WTF u mean NO! HE TAKE YOUR HEART TEFA HE MUST DIE SO WE CAN HAVE IT BACK!!

    tefa: THEN i DON'T WANT IT BACK!! crying crying

    Rebel: scream TEFA FOR GOODNES SAKE DON'T BE STUPID!! U GOTTA 10 SEC!!!

    tefa: cry no...

    rebel: you'll be a doll for ever!!

    tefa: hem rolleyes , is just forever... ( the doll transformation began)

    suddenly a hand grabed tefa's arm and pulls her down

    tefa: ja...

    kiss

    (from janez iron man story)"You, iron man, I will not kill you or even take the magic heart away from you, but I will bewitch it, if u can´t recieve a kiss from your true love before chritmas, the heart will became poisinous, and turn u into a moveless machine"

    rebel: eek
    soohe: eek
    angel: eek

    imi: rofl rofl rofl rofl blaugh blaugh HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA OMG TEFA JANEZ!!!! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA rofl

    tefa slowly transform into human again

    reader: is she naked?? surprised
    writter: in underwer redface
    readers: wooooow!!! rofl

    janez: here, cover redface

    janez gives his cape to tefa

    tefa: directly from Milan xd

    janez: ejje yea xp

    THE END

    imi: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA blaugh rofl rofl

    tefa: ok imi, is over stare

    imi: BUT U TWO KISS AAAAAAAAAA!!!!

    janez: IT WAS JUST ACTING!!

    imi: jaja yea yea that's how they call it now a days rolleyes





    WELL GUYS THE END FINALLY HERE! SPECIAL THANKS FOR THE ONES THAT ALWAYS READ AND POST, TO JANEZ THAT THAT WRITE THE COOLEST MEANWHILES EVER AND TO ALL THE FRIENDS THAT SUPPORT ME IN THIS STORY!! 4laugh

    SORY FOR THE ONES THAT I DIDN'T INCLUDE, BUT DON'T WORY A NEW STORY IS BUILDING IN MY MIND AND THERE WILL BE SPACE FOR EVERYONE TO PARTICIPATE!!!! well I'll try sweatdrop

    MERRY CHRISTMAS AND A HAPPY HAPPY NEW YEAR!!! I HOPE ALL YOUR DREAMS COME TRUE!!! 3nodding 4laugh

    JANEZ NOW IF U WNT U CAN WRITE THE PROLOGO xp


    The Protective Knight
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    Tue Dec 25, 2007 @ 11:20pm


    WTF WHERE THE STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


    The Protective Knight
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    Tue Dec 25, 2007 @ 11:23pm


    JANEZ LIKES TEFA JANEZ LIKES TEFA


    NightsDarkestFall
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    Tue Dec 25, 2007 @ 11:44pm


    awwwwwww the ending was so...so... Romantic!!! crying crying (ok put it together) ah ok I'm cool I'm cool XD anyways I love the part when u put like the narrator and the readers rofl and when I say "and the good night kiss"XD. well anyways I loved the story tefa great work ^^


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    Janez 21
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    Tue Dec 25, 2007 @ 11:47pm


    Meanwhile in so.. mad WTF, I mean:

    PROLOGUE

    And this is how the story ended, with that battle, kissing, surprising and shouting, but do u want to know what happened after that with all the characters?

    2 years later

    Janez: Tefa, can u please bring me my wallet? surprised
    Tefa: What for? confused
    Janez: To pay to imi
    Tefa: Oh, right

    Tefa gives the wallet to janez and he writes a check at the name of Iminayo La Lumieré for her monthly nanny-work payment

    Tefa: I'm so happy we hired her, the kids are happier than ever smile
    Janez: 3nodding

    In the living room we found Sohee, Public_enemy, Angel and Yuki watching TV and eating cookies

    Imi: who wants some more cookies?! blaugh
    All the guys: Me!! blaugh
    Sohee: NAnny Imi, I'm so glad cow-santa came that special year afterall, he brought me this beutiful doll and now I don't need to turn people into dolls anymore 4laugh
    Imi: yeah, now we all are a big lovely family, except for that_dumb_rebel
    Public_enemy: Yeah, daddy killed that b*****d after he healed entirely
    Imi: PUblic_enemy! always so rude, oh can u please give me one of those fashion magazines in the table? neutral
    Angel: I'll do it nanny, don't u want me to read the first page for you? wink
    Imi: Ok, do it wink

    Angel reads:

    *"Hello, I'm Janez,a milan fashion desginer, I moved with my family and nany to milan after I met my wife, now that I'm heterosexually amrried I can be the best designer ever without being accused of homosexuality!"*

    Imi: oh! your dad always so funny! rofl

    PUNCH PUNCH

    Sohee: What si that noise? confused
    Angel: Dad and mom again stare
    Sohee: OH, so we are having a brother confused
    Angel: Yep, it seems like wink

    In the masterbedroom we found tefa and janez buying a child by the internet and the mouse sounds: PUNCH PUNCH

    At the living room

    Imi: So I suppose now we will be a bigger, and more lovely family

    Master bedroom again

    Janez: I ahte this cheesy, perfect family theme, maybe I will escape and destroy this house, then I will make all people wear my clothes and conquer the world!! twisted
    Tefa: Honey, come to beeeed blaugh
    Janez: Or maye no.. heheheh pirate

    THE END


    Iminayo
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    Wed Dec 26, 2007 @ 12:18am


    ok....... hahahaha!!!! the scerams are so me!!! hahahaha i really laughed so much when i read it, well done tefa XP
    AAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!! X3 man that realy was my reaction at the kiss....aaahhhh!!!!!! X3 stili can't believe it, and the final part of the prologe... jani? what's with the bujuju?
    ahhhhhh!!!! X3 best story ever XP i loved my role and everyone elses characters as how the not well organized theme developed, surely i didn't know what to expect
    your always number one fan
    Iminayo La Lumiére (Nanny 3nodding )


    The Protective Knight
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    Wed Dec 26, 2007 @ 12:20am


    JANEZ AND TEFA SITTING IN A TREE K-I-S-S-I-N-G
    so janez wishes


    NightsDarkestFall
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    Wed Dec 26, 2007 @ 12:25am


    WTF eek Janez is my father? *tan tan tan* and tefa is my mom? man I laughed when I read it rofl rofl like that. man janez U tell great stories biggrin
    and i didnt expect any of that sweatdrop


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    Public_Enemy68
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    Wed Dec 26, 2007 @ 01:04am


    WTF? ur my mom? sweatdrop
    the ending was very unexpected, but it couldnt turn out better! blaugh


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