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YES! I know I am unartisic and uncreative and can't write once decent thing!
SO STOP BLAMING ME!!!!!
*collapses*
I over did it again...
The Great Tragedy of Martin and Yairi...
It's a rp she and I did "on the spot" and we figured it was good enough to show...

It's supposed to be me as a evil vampire, and her as the victim, but I'll let you decide who was really in this...


Yairi: *walks down the ally*

Martin: *out of the shadows, his accursed eyes follow her*

*shivers feeling eyes on me i walk a bit faster*

*he continues to follow, silently gliding through the night air*

*i finally get to my door and im looking for my keys*

*I suddenly drop behind her, dangling in my hand her only means of escape*

hey!?

looking for these *he says with a smirk*

*i try to get them from you*

*I raise my arm up, keeping them out of reach*

*i jump up to get them*

*as soon as she does, I wrap my arms around her, so her feet don't even touch the ground* Heh, I have you now

*blushes and tires to squirm out of your arms*

*looks into your eyes* why are you even resisting

*blushes even more and is sorta transed*

*my forehead touches yours* you have nothing to fight for, so relax

*i blush even more and stop squirming*

*while still gazing into her eyes, I ask* What might thy name, fair maiden

...yairi and you stranger

*without letting his eyes off you* I am but of no name, but to simply be one with the night, a shadow of every woman's vision, her dream realized

but not of mine sir *i try to escape from your grasp*

*they come face to face* And of what ladyship would deny her own desires?

*i stare into your eyes with a glare of hatred not wanting to admit the truth becuase im so stubern* not i

*I place my hand on the back f her neck, running my fingers through her hair* You believe that thou can avert thine eyes from the truth of your truest passion?

*looks at you questoning in my eyes* and who are you to tell me whether i say the truth or not

For I have seen what truly lies within the heart of many, for each and every one of them speaks of the same passion and desire...love

and for that you are mistakened i do not love *i try to fight from your arms once again feeling as if some one had stabed me in the darkness where lies my dieying heart locked for eterenity not wanting a part of this world they call love*

Why does thou think thine heart is undeserving of such...

...Tis a trait every human strives for, why make thou an exception to such a natural goal in life

because sir i know not your true being or name...

...and on top of all that i am just human a mortal to suffer till i die unless you have come to make that wish come true earlly

Twas it not Romeo himself the truth fo his own heritage that he did not confess, until late into their meeting upon juliet?

and i will never confess

To what tragic cause lies that thou would mask thine own identity

my heart is weakened with the poision of the puetred arrows it has been stuck with in all i fail and die

So thou refusing love, for in fear of being refused?

not refused broken

An yet thou prefers such as the melancholy of loneliness, more so than the odds of a true paradise? 

*i nodd saddly tears at the edges of my eyes*

How can one such as yourself willingly succumb thyself to such certain grief, rather than step into the unknown of what may be thy greatest triumph?

it could be the greatest fall as well

How can you deny the one difference you humans carry, that truly separates yourself from the other beasts of this world?

*i shake my head trying to get out of your memzmorizing eyes but find my self staring at the floor at last pushing you away practically in tears * i do love , i refuse it so i wont end up like the rest broken hearted suffering ive felt it once or twice never agian*

*Almost smothered in rage I practically slam her against her own door, and yell in protest* Then to what great cause do you deny that very light you witnessed yourself to exist?!

*i start to cry but soon get a hold of my self and the tears still flow and i look back into your eyes jsut as outraged* and who are you to tell me how to live ! what do you care for all i knwo you jsut want my blood take it i dont want to live to be hurt! *the tears stream silently as i glare into your darkened pained eyes*

...Because I once had that very feeling to uplift my heart...

...But now, to these days, I only exist now for the sake of my own survial...

...no longer to pursue what I once held dear to the heart I once felt beating within my own chest

let me down... please

*With purpose lost, my arms droop, releasing her keys, and turning away, I walk a few steps before I say my farewell*

*i stop you*

Though you may not realize those keys are the final lock to the darkness of your own spirt...

.....open that door, and light will never reach you, even death could not save you

*i turn you around and kiss you* (yairi)

*ive given up all will of fighting and cling to you now *save me from my self*i wisper*

Though my heart no longer spreads life through my body, tis racked with guilt for what I must do...

*without warning, I grab her and sink my teeth deep into her neck*

*i scream out in pain but i hold you close*

*I hold her closely to my chest, knowing full well of her pain, and in that she will finally be liberated from such misery, for all of time*

*i fall into your arms*

*Once certain her spirt has freed itself from its shell, I hold her in my arms and walk her to her doorstep*

*upon reaching it, I gently let her body rest upon the cold ground of this earth*

*Finally, from the pocket of my jacket, I lay upon her chest, the wilted flower of a blue rose*

*my spirit lingers around him for ever more*

May thy spirit embrace the freedom bestowed upon it

[Exeunt]

I know, alots wrong, with it, I just copied it straight form our conversation, I'll try to find some time to edit it later, unless you would like to, in which case I'll be happy to look over with you...

In any case, thanks for reading it, and don't forget to tell us what you think! 3nodding
-SDBX



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princess_yairi
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commentCommented on: Fri Jan 18, 2008 @ 01:45am
blaugh i like it but so sad ^^ im trully a victim at heart arent i ^^


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