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LIFE & LOVE OF TIM M.
My life sucks and i want to die!my friends deserte me daily. And i feel like my heart has been ripped into so many little pieces that they all could be thread through the eye of a needle. She is tearing me appart at the seam!
Withen the lines of Love,
All that happens is push and shove.
But when you get pushed across the line,
All we hold is what is dearest, & mine.
And when you heart gets split in two,
then you have to make it new.
After it is all done and over with,
my hearns for a good depressing myth.
I pay attetion and look at my life,
still depressed i look at a long, cold, steel knife.
I look at the great life i have had,
and just look how it went from good, to bad.
The cold object is becoming a friend,
then all is do is just pretend.
That the knife will slip,
now i just see red and tip.
On the ground looking how my life is hell,
i see light and hear a soft and distant bell.
The light becomes bright and warm,
there is just a standing figure with a wierd form.
A form, a form i used to shove,
It wasn't the knife but a person i used to love.
My life is comming to an end,
all i know now is that i still love my dear old friend.
Holding them tight i say good-bye,
all i do now is just Sit, Wait, and Die.
by timothy mellon
that is me so comment on it please...



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b-ballstar24
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commentCommented on: Mon Oct 08, 2007 @ 08:33pm
i luv this poem, you did a real good job on it. Its really deep. heart


commentCommented on: Sun Jan 27, 2008 @ 04:04am
Ook hun whats up is this a refrence to someone??????



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