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the dark thoughs of my mind.
i beg only one to be with me. i live for one to be with me. i try to help the one to be with me. i fail all three, for my goal is not in my grasp. i become distant from her, letting my tears fall to my feet in shame of myself. i look for her, hoping to find her and tell her how i feel. i hope to embrace and kiss her one day. for now that day is not in reach. someday though, it shall.






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Corbins_my_boy07
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Sun Oct 28, 2007 @ 08:39pm


That was beautiful it really was crying . Ur good at writing poems. maybe u should read mine and tell me wat I should improve on.


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Lil Miss Hawt Uchiha-chan
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Tue Oct 30, 2007 @ 01:46am


kimi-kun that was so deep,can you rate my poem too and see if its ok?


shizuko-san14
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Sat Nov 10, 2007 @ 01:45am


Wow that was really sweet. I love it. I'm going to check out your other poems.


iam_the_evilest_girl123
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Wed Dec 12, 2007 @ 09:01pm


is this poem for me?


Kimo Kitsune
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Fri Dec 14, 2007 @ 02:38am


Of course. This is my past commitment, but I now have a different verison:
I beg only one to be with me. I live for one to be with me. I have almost failed this person, but I give up not. Tears dry on my cheeks as I look down to my feet, wondering about a goal. I look for this special person and hope to meet her some day. One day, my fantasy of able to kiss her, to hug her, or even brush my hand gently and softly against her perfect cheek, will soon be of reach. I care for her, and will someday, be with her.


hahayouvebeenjacked
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Sun Dec 23, 2007 @ 02:58am


awwww i wanna cry its soo deep and touching!


Yami Kokoro
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Sun Dec 23, 2007 @ 02:22pm


~Truly Beautiful~


SureinDragon
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Fri Apr 04, 2008 @ 06:31am


wow! will you read a few of my storys? for somehow i think poems are similar to storys in a way.... i am now inspied to wright a new story!


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