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The obsqure thoughts of a genius
Amber Fields and Rose Petal kisses
HOKAY! I decided to try my hand at another poem.. why I don't know. I'm not really good at them and just kinda blab out what is in my head.. lol. well here it is.

Those Lips
That hair
Those eyes
That face
A man of fine, body
Sound mind and reason
Should explain the magic hidden in that frame and eyes
The eyes capturing sunrise over a field
The lips of a gentle rose petal’s kiss
The soft silk skin of sweet honey
A magic that captures a man’s heart and soul
In one swift flash of those Amber lighted eyes
One should fear a bewitching power such as yours
How’ ere I would give a thousand souls
To forever be falling into that sunrise light
And those arms of sweet honey
Oh to be loved in such rapture is truly a magic to be adored

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A. Drake
Community Member
commentCommented on: Mon Jul 30, 2007 @ 01:48pm
I have no idea why I write from a man's persepctive. lol the poem is about my husband... but i make him into a girl *shrug*

commentCommented on: Mon Jul 30, 2007 @ 07:36pm
Blabbing out what is in your head is the best way to write poetry!

I like yours!

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commentCommented on: Mon Jul 30, 2007 @ 11:49pm
indeed now you gotta write one about me *flex and tosses hair*

commentCommented on: Wed Aug 01, 2007 @ 03:12am
It's beautiful! You write like one of my friends! biggrin

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commentCommented on: Sun Jan 13, 2008 @ 09:39pm

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