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I Don't Wanna Die
Sometimes Wish I'd Never Been Born At All

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Not Good Enough: Part 3
I pulled out my weapon
And her I did hit
Before she could scream
And throw a huge fit

I had her on the ground
She was so very lifeless
I had struck her skull
So quick almost painless

I heard you upstairs
So I ran up in a flash
Not even looking down
To see her bloody gash

I found you in the bedroom
Naked under the covers
I knew you were gonna make love
To your now deceased lover

Your eyes bulged wide
As you saw my murderous stare
My shaking armed hands
My uncontrollable hair

I saw you try to run
But I lurched so quick
Within the next two minutes
The walls were lined with blood so thick

It was then when I realized
What I had just did
I had just killed
Two innocent college kids

I felt so ******** guilty
And that's why I'm here right now
Screaming in he road
Being so ******** loud

I deserve to be in your state
I want to be in hell
I'm too weak for suicide
But I guess oh well

I see a huge truck coming
At 80 miles an hour
The driver has been drinking
He's probably so ******** hammered

I guess this is my lucky day
I'll be gone in about a snap
My brains on the tires
My heart no longer trapped

I will have gotten what was coming
A dark and gorey end
And this DUI
Will continue my killing trend

The End

User Comments: [5]
Silent Emotion
Community Member

Thu Jul 05, 2007 @ 12:40am

Aaaah you ******** I love it!

angelic chobit chii
Community Member

Thu Jul 05, 2007 @ 12:47am

this poem is well put together you are an amazing writer

Community Member

Thu Jul 05, 2007 @ 01:34am

Good to know there are still souls out there, who really can make a poem. Very nice.

Community Member

Sun Jul 08, 2007 @ 02:38am

this has to be the most murderous, blood filled, and Arousing poem I've ever read...I LOVE IT! your very talented love....nice work!....lol

Community Member

Mon Jul 09, 2007 @ 12:11am

you are very good heart rofl rofl lol cool cheese_whine 4laugh lol

User Comments: [5]
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