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yea i know its weird for a guy to write poetry and all but who cares...people say its really good^^ let me know what you think
well heres my first one...its pretty dark
The Other Side
Theres a different side to everyone and sometimes its not that great. A side filled with hate, sorrow, and pain. No one sees him suffering, no body cares...as he wanders through the hallways trembling in fear. Not afraid of students, teachers, or tests, but afraid of himself, afraid of what he might become.
Its easy to get lost, and its hard to get back. Theres no light in the darkness, your stuck alone, left to fend for yourself against an enemy thats been around since man...hate. How can you beat an enemy you can't see? but you can see it, its all around you, people hating each other, its in this building, its on t.v, its in all of us and with each negative experience we have, it grows in us. You can't let it go, you can't ignore it, you think its gone but it never is.
People always assume that the kid that never has money, doesn't have designer clothes, and who is dirty and unwashed, has had a bad life, but thats not always the case. He might be the most nice and caring person you could ever meet. But take a guy who has a good life, with a good family and wealth and thats where trouble starts. That person is the most dangerous because no one can see through him, they only see that he appears to be happy. No one truly understands him, even he doesn't understand himself.
The darkness doesn't speak to him for it knows no language only killing and hate, thats all it understands...all it wants.
heres my edited part...: You call this a life? People are afraid to walk alone for fear of being beaten or robbed, or raped. Why do we have to live in fear? Theres no place where i feel safe, not even here, and not home. I am always afraid, most of the time not of others, but of myself...
heres my second one they are not all negative:
Blue Angel
Let me be your angel,
let me wipe away your tears.
Let me be your angel,
I will fight away your fears.
Let me be your angel,
I'll protect you with my life.
Let me be your angel,
I will cherish you as my wife.
Let me be your angel,
I will keep you safe,as you
fall asleep in my arms.
Forever caring, forever loving,
forever understanding...
Let me be your angel...
heres my third one its sorta half and half but tis cool^^:
Why?
Why do i live?
Every second I exist hurts someone...
I hurt people so much without even
realizing it, so much that they hate me,
and never want to see me again. I make
that person cry without realizing it, and
knowing this makes me hurt more inside.
I wish i could tell you im sorry...but by
now your out of reach. Even if you could
hear me you wouldn't believe...your too
far gone, blinded by your anger and hatred,
to see the truth...to see me...
Why do i live?
I live not for me, but for the person
who thinks about me every night before
they fall asleep. I live to put a smile on
that persons face every time they see me,
to make that persons heart skip when I
call her name...Why do i live? I live to
make you happy...
...But most of all, I live to see the ending to my story...
always
There is always someone in this world who can see right through you. Who makes you feel truly happy when you see her. That one person can walk right past your defenses as if they weren't even there, and strike you in the worst critical point...the heart. Even if you wanted to stop her you couldn't, if she hit you, you would take the full force of it without trying to defend yourself. You feel vulnerable and powerless when your with her, but maybe she has just awakened a new strength within you...just that you don't know how to use it yet. Love is control, whether you believe it or not...it affects how we think, how we fight, and how we act...but if love is control..then I'm all yours...
Heres a poem a friend of mine wrote. He asked me to put it in my journal,so i did^^
Still Human
I am the darkness and the light.
I see a column of light,but I can't reach it.
I hear nothing, just nothing. Its just as if I am blind to the world of light.
I smell life and death, and the feelings of hate and love.
I taste the fear and sadness within you.
I can touch the very soul and mind of you.
I feel as my heart is dark with hate, sadness, and anger. But there is light within my heart, that is filled with happiness, joy, love, and friendship.
I am still human, the light within me will defeat this darkness inside me.
 Final Freedom · Wed Oct 13, 2004 @ 08:14pm · 7 Comments |
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