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Who I am.
This is who i am in my innermost self.
Pain
Pain
A world of pain
Where everyone
Seems not to care
We hurt each other
Sometimes for fun
Other times unintended
I have been hurt
By those I trusted
They abused
What I gave freely
My heart
They took advantage
And caused me
A pain that cannot
Be silenced except
By the grave.






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report_manager_XxXxX
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commentCommented on: Sat May 26, 2007 @ 07:02am
that is awsomeness poem dude


commentCommented on: Sat May 26, 2007 @ 10:46pm
Such a sad thing isn't it? people take advantage of such a generous heart.


A Heart such as a innocent Rose is blind to the dangers of the storm, it's petals of tenderness pulled away by unseen fingers and the heavy rain of such ache and chaos.



Catherine_Fox_LeBeau
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iL i t h i u m
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commentCommented on: Sun May 27, 2007 @ 04:14am
Beautiful but sad Poem. Kind of reminds me of a few things and certainly one could definately relate to it. Perfectly done.


commentCommented on: Mon May 28, 2007 @ 03:01am
Aw KING!!! its beautiful but so sad....i HEART YOU!!!!



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Hungrynomad
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commentCommented on: Tue May 29, 2007 @ 03:44pm
That poem speak so much truth, it's seen everyday. Well, you can't heal if you don't first get hurt.


commentCommented on: Fri Jun 01, 2007 @ 12:25am
omg that is so true i have been hurt by ppl i loved cared 4 and trusted so many times



ElaineeNicolee
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commentCommented on: Fri Jun 01, 2007 @ 07:05pm
that was beautiful!


commentCommented on: Sat Jun 02, 2007 @ 02:53am
i knwo exactly what that poem is saying cause i am feeling it right now



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Jesus_is_kings
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commentCommented on: Sun Jun 03, 2007 @ 09:10pm
Your poem really touched me dude. Nice one. 3nodding


commentCommented on: Wed Jul 18, 2007 @ 08:49pm
I love you big brother and sorry u had to go through this!



Princess Euphoria
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