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jynx2000
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darkness
you fight it
only to find out you won't win
the darkness has pulled you in
its tendrils embracing you
its presence erasing you
and you foolishly hope
hope that someone will lead you out of this darkness
hope and hope till no avail
No one cares(that you're alive)
No one cares(if you die)
why won't someone grab your hand
Release you from the darkness within






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Teleute Eirene
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comment Commented on: Wed Jun 27, 2007 @ 09:04pm
Darkness

Embraces all as the night falls.
A time of rest, a chance to dream
Of cherubs and sephardims.

Over your head shines the moon and stars
In your heart, time to heal your wounds and scars

So as you stumble in the dark
Know that someone is there
Someone who loves you and cares

Then may, in your heart, this thought ignite
That without darkness, will there be light?


comment Commented on: Sat Aug 25, 2007 @ 06:33pm
nice
well your poem is diffrent from mines
mines was actually ment to be dark and scary
but yours made me question existence....



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