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Tome of Knowledge
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1st up in my series of writings that were born while I was tired:

A frigid world with beauty aglow
Light that's shone from a cold source
I dream of traversing through desert snow
In hopes of finding a warm force

With hands of ice you hold my heart
And I stand aside and observe
To gain your trust is a start
But your heart is full of curves

should I say this, you'll hear that
Interpretations always contrary
Forever in your barren flat
Of my intentions you're still wary


Haven't edited it, so you get to see it totally unpolished.

Zanep Lodes
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  • User Comments: [4]
    genista
    Community Member





    Sat Apr 05, 2008 @ 10:33pm


    Yay! Another post! I always love your poetry.

    "with hands of ice you hold my heart...." heart !


    Zanep Lodes
    Community Member





    Sun Apr 06, 2008 @ 01:15am


    Thank you. I'm glad I get to share them.

    Though lately, they took a little more after the bad relationship theme. Which bothers me, seeing as I don't like people to dwell on the negatives, and I was pretty confident I had vented my doubts and fears about my situation. Guess I hadn't, huh?


    Jiss Miral
    Community Member





    Wed Apr 23, 2008 @ 08:26pm


    It's sad. Really nicely put, though. I hope that's not your situation right now.


    Gracekitty
    Community Member





    Wed Aug 13, 2008 @ 06:56am


    That was very beautiful. I enjoyed it very much. I've got to show you some of my poetry.


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