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The year 2158, new technology has been discovered and is being used to its best possible use. A small problem was thought to be foreseen in the future and the government hired a company, Zion Inc., to build the next weapon for defense. The happily agreed to do so and used the latest and state of the art technology to build mechs made specifically for warfare, each one holding some of the greatest technology, they called project Zion. Somehow word of the mechs had gotten out and had started a commotion over seas. In an attempted to hack the mechs before they were completed and sabotage them, they were activated, there AI units where scrambled some but not decommissioned. In a panic of the moment the mechs attacked people in the facility and escaped killing many including the head of the Zion Inc, leaving the company in the hands of his son Kiro Zion. A small scan of what had happened to the mech gave a full explanation of what had happened, in the attempt to tamper with the mech, the hacker had messed with the AI making it human like, if you will, and had given the mechs emotion and free will. Panic was the first thing they felt for someone was hacking their system, the hackers where neutralized but the panic was still there and in turn, cause the massive killing. Due to this action the government has issued that they are to dangerous and are to be destroyed as soon as possible, though the first few attacks seemed only to provoke the mechs and cause more killing. The mechs, in belief that the humans are a threat to their survival, are trying to just survive but with humans after them it seems they will have to fight. The government has called upon there best solder to take care of the problem along with some hired help. Kiro realized that his company would require that this technology be recovered if his company is to stay alive for billions of dollars had been placed on it. He had decided that he and the help of an old hired hand friend would have to take the mech alive to recover the technology.



does this sound good......at all
i want to make it into an rp but i keep getting this feeling no one is going to join so i want some advise on what need to be improved or any other ideas to make it better, also i can't think of a name XP

Too far in the future, too many chances to god mod. You need to make an RP simple, so that the storyline is a little more easier to understand. If you can make it like up to 2099, and make the weapons and robots slightly more advanced than today, then that would be better.