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 Posted: Sat Feb 03, 2007 1:07 pm
Soul Auction
Name the price
Priceless
Broken inside
Priceless
Broken, let go
Lost forever
Walk alone
Feel so worthless
Feel so wasted
Never to know
She’s priceless, I’d die for her
But she’ll never know
She’s lost
Her soul’s alone
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Posted: Sat Mar 17, 2007 9:04 pm
This piece has a good message. I think that you could probably add a bit more feeling to it, but it's powerful.
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