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 Posted: Tue Nov 14, 2006 4:20 pm
I many times will be atempting to make custom jutsu and as i dont have full understanding of D20 yet i may need astiance on fine tuning some jutsu's.
First I have a idea for a non spreadable curse But im not even sure if im doing it right.
Shiro Tora Hyoukyo-(White Tiger's Curse) Not a attack but closer to blood line. This curse halves damage from fire attacks, and heat directed at weilder and cannot be burned. But at a later random time even if not in combat the pain returns injurying or imcapticating for breif time.
-Forces fire affinity
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Is there somthing esle i can do with this? such as adding mods it adds or removes?
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Posted: Tue Nov 14, 2006 4:27 pm
Nenshou Tansen- (Burning edge)
The user maniuplates chakra to draw in any and heat from surondings. The Massive power comes form as the weilder channels and compresses all the heat and fire, drawn in in to a extremly compressed area. Once the chakra, heat, and fire are compresed in to a small orb no bigger than ones palm. Then the weilder Holds arm aways from the target and realses a small portion of the jutsus power, to in turn trust self foreward like a rockt additn indredible speed to the jutsu.
Cp cost: 100
Damage: 150 - 350 + chakra mod + 10 damage for each Fire jutsu used prior.
Requeriments: Fire Affinity. Ninjutsu 80 Ranks.
Training days: 35 days.
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Posted: Tue Nov 14, 2006 5:15 pm
Katon: Kaenhoushaki no jutsu- (Fire realse: Flamethrower technique)
The weilder sucks in a great deal of air, and mends the air with chakra. As it is blown out of mouth, it ignites in to a stream of fire. The stream of fire can be change by weilder, by having mouth open wide with short range and wide spread, or small with medium range and minimal spread.
Cp cost: 15
Damage: 15 - 30 + chakra modifier.
Requirements: Fire Affinity, Chakra 20+
Training days: 10 days.
(edit)
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Posted: Thu Nov 16, 2006 5:01 pm
What could i do to these to make them acpetable?
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Posted: Fri Nov 17, 2006 3:21 pm
Nenshou Ni Me- (Burning red eye)
The weilder uses fire to create a working eye, which is typicly cast over a glass eye. It can also be cast in mid air to use as means of searching, but when used in this manner the weilder must remain still to keep focous.
Cp cost: 10
Damage: N/A
Requeriments: ninjutsu 20+
Training days: 15
Special: "Act as a replacment eye, or method of spying."
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Posted: Fri Nov 17, 2006 3:39 pm
Shiro Tora Hyoukyo-(White Tiger's Curse)
This curse is created when a soul with so much hatered fianly finds sombody or somthing to force it to share it pain and hatered. The effect of this curse Halves damage from fire attacks and heat. Only to return the damge at a later time thus casuing the weilder more pain as he/she must go threw the same pain a second time.
-Forces fire affinity
-Reduces damage from fire attacks by 50%
-After reciving damage from a fire attack in 10 posts will cause same amount of damage wich was recived from the fire attack.
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Posted: Fri Nov 17, 2006 3:45 pm
What can i do to thses to make them acptable?
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Posted: Sat Nov 18, 2006 12:37 pm
sweatdrop Whats the point of posting these asking for revisions to make acptable if nobody helps? sweatdrop
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Posted: Mon Nov 20, 2006 11:54 am
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Posted: Tue Nov 21, 2006 6:53 pm
To tell you the truth. I think whether something gets approved or not depends on Kenkaru's mood. I think some of your stats and stuff are too high....
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Posted: Wed Nov 22, 2006 11:14 am
For the burning edge i would say the same and i revised it...just not here sweatdrop plus burning edge would be like a final move.
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Posted: Wed Nov 22, 2006 12:27 pm
Ryu Sui no Ugoki - (Running Water Movements)
These are very slow, flowing movements used to confuse the opponents into where to attack. You make multiple images of yourself by making two Clones and simply keep them moving before you or after you, becasue of the flow-like moving. While moving you are in a defensive stance, and you switch to offensive when you attack. You attack fast unlike the movements to confuse the opponent aswell. The flow like movements along with the two clones moving around you cause your image to move like that of a blurr, simular to that of Mikazuki no Mai (Dance of the Crescent Moon) but the clones arnt solid but illusions.
Cp cost: 5 (Lasts 5 posts)
Damage: N/A
Requeriments: Bunshin no Jutsu
Training days: 15
Special: Add +10 to dodge.
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kouri-chan_xx Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Nov 22, 2006 6:40 pm
Sorreh leh... the GD here is kinda slow... sometimes I forget it exists... ^^'
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Posted: Wed Nov 22, 2006 6:41 pm
giglamesh Ryu Sui no Ugoki - (Running Water Movements)These are very slow, flowing movements used to confuse the opponents into where to attack. You make multiple images of yourself by making two Clones and simply keep them moving before you or after you, becasue of the flow-like moving. While moving you are in a defensive stance, and you switch to offensive when you attack. You attack fast unlike the movements to confuse the opponent aswell. The flow like movements along with the two clones moving around you cause your image to move like that of a blurr, simular to that of Mikazuki no Mai (Dance of the Crescent Moon) but the clones arnt solid but illusions. Cp cost: 5 Damage: N/A Requeriments: Bunshin no Jutsu Training days: 15 I think this is too similar to Hayate's jutsu... it's the same except for the Bunshins replacing the kage bunshins.
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kouri-chan_xx Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Nov 25, 2006 11:07 am
Its very simular but to the cresent moon dance, Although this jutsu is used for defense instead of offense. Esentialy oppsite the cresent moon dance.
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