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Dude Tak is Posting?
what is this?
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woah...
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woot woot! total awesomeness.
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Total Votes : 9


Tak-Jak
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Mon Nov 06, 2006 12:11 pm


She smiled sadly and withdrew her hands,
"It's pretty."

He pushed the hair out of his eyes with his fingertips,
"I'll trade it to you
for a kiss"


She looked away,
"You know it's worth more
than a little kiss,"

she whispered.

A half-hidden smile
his warm fingers slowly reaching around her neck
"Then I'll take more
than a little kiss,"

he drew her into the doorway
her back up against the frame.

A feeling
like you are about to pass out
flowered in her breast.
PostPosted: Mon Nov 06, 2006 6:20 pm


awww. How sweeeeeeeet! heart

KirbyVictorious


Tak-Jak
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Tue Nov 07, 2006 3:32 am


Do I get cookies for posting now?
PostPosted: Tue Nov 07, 2006 6:43 am


*tosses gingersnaps*

HAWK GO AWAY!!! MY COOKIES!

*ahem*

Anyway...

KirbyVictorious


Gomenroia

PostPosted: Wed Nov 08, 2006 10:34 am


Totally!!

*hands over her bag of neverending cookies*

Take two and pass it back and whatever you do DON'T let Hawk see that!!
PostPosted: Wed Nov 08, 2006 11:36 am


3nodding

Tak-Jak
Vice Captain


BlackHawkGS

PostPosted: Wed Nov 08, 2006 3:57 pm


If I used the word 'adorable' regularly, then this is where I'd be saying it in large and bolded font.

... But instead I'll just toss you a cookie. xd
PostPosted: Wed Nov 08, 2006 6:57 pm


awww I would much rather have had Adorable written in big bolded print.
Just to see Hawk say that xp

Tak-Jak
Vice Captain


KirbyVictorious

PostPosted: Thu Nov 09, 2006 6:39 pm


XD

a guy, say adorable?

not gonna happen.

nuuuuuway.

and we need manly men hereabouts. Becausde, we're all girls.

Cept, I'm a tomboy...whatever.
PostPosted: Fri Nov 10, 2006 8:15 pm


I Love it when guys say adorable.
My boyfriend says it.
And he is a manly man.

Or else I wouldnt be dating him!
haha joking. I Love him to death.

And your Right kirby...
There are alot of girls hereabout

Tak-Jak
Vice Captain


Gaaras_Little_Sister

PostPosted: Sun Nov 12, 2006 4:28 pm


I was listening to P! ATD's "Lying is the Most Fun a Girl Can Have Without Taking Her Clothes Off" while reading this, and it almost matched the scenario. Reading this actually turned me on! *scary* It makes me wish my boyfriend and I would get that romantic already! *tears of longing* heart
PostPosted: Sun Nov 12, 2006 8:57 pm


Umm.. that was an interesting comment..
*cough*
Never turned anyone on with my writing

Tak-Jak
Vice Captain


KirbyVictorious

PostPosted: Sun Nov 12, 2006 9:01 pm


OMG funny.

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Takkun, it's a woman's world. Men...jus don't know it yet.

And manly men are really fun, I s'pose. (personally, I have never made friends with one.) But I like the sweet sensitive ones. The ones that other guys would call pansies.

Hehehe twisted
PostPosted: Mon Nov 13, 2006 4:22 pm


So, I get turned on easily. What's the big deal?! ^_^ *oh, I love it when I get turned on...*

Gaaras_Little_Sister


KirbyVictorious

PostPosted: Mon Nov 13, 2006 9:21 pm


hate it. so much. Cause there are NO guys worthy of KIRBYVICTORIOUS in my school.

No, I've tried it. NOTHING. it sucks
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