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Swinter and Ariana.

Pictures of Swinter (Male arctic wolf with wings smile ) (Height: 5.7 feet) (Pictures 17, 18, 20, 22, 23 and 24 also show Ariana.)
Pictures of Ariana Landers (Female white furred fox) (Height: 5.1 feet)

Swinter:
Swinter is a white furred arctic wolf and he's wearing white silk trousers and a white silk shirt, the clothing of a noble from around the year 1400. His hair is white too, but not of age, it just is smile . He's agile and somewhat muscular, but not overly so. He's got strenght and agility, but he's not one to lift 300 kg easily.
Oh and his eyes are red ^-^.

Ariana:
Ariana is also completly white furred, including hair. Though her clothing varies. Hmm. A long, modest dress of pretty fine making. Perhaps light blue? (If you can think of a better colour feel free to sugest it smile .)
Arianas build is pretty slim with a moderate bust. I guess most would be hidden in the dress though xP.

Hello there :3.

I've got a few concerns with the picture, though definivitly not of the art quality! smile Mainly my concerns lay with the male, and I'll try to write said concerns here. 3nodding

Now, first of all I'll give a point on the accessories you've given him smile .
The character wouldn't have an ear ring, just no way on that I'm afraid! It's not really his style. A ring, yes, but not an ear ring :3.
Other than that it's the sword smile . In the event Swinter would be using a weapon he'd be using a dagger, and likely some expensive ornate thing. If he have to do something violent he'd prefer doing it unseen and unheard wink . Mind you, he's no rogue razz . (After all, white wouldn't be a fitting clothing for someone trying to be stealthy as much as possible after.)

Now, going more for the character's builds I really only have one concern, and that is their snouts smile . The males snout looks more like it'd fit a bulldog than a wolf, perhaps it is possible to make it slightly longer? Reference wolf picture.
The female is quite alright though, I'm guessing that the hints to her snout will apear once coloured. Here's a reference picture on an Arctic Fox too, if needed.

And now, finally, the pose!
The pose is good, no complaints razz . I must ask what the setting is though? xD I mean, the male wears a stern expression, as if watching something he dislike. The fact that the weapon is drawn also seems to show that there's something not too good going on xP. This seems to be quite different from the female though, who it looks like hugs the male affectionatley?
I'm getting some mixed messages, which is what led me to ask smile .
(I guess if I'd have anything to say about the pose then it'd be that the way their hands are held it looks like the male has breasts too xP. And that the males one hand is a bit long.)


That's all! Muhahaha! Bet you've learned that it's dangerous to ask what I think wink . At least when I'm paying for it, then I'll definivitly point stuff out razz .

I'll post my comments on this asap. I've been a bit busy lately though 3nodding .
All in all it do look good, (with maybe the femmes teethy smile looking a bit odd), but I wanted to let the other characters owner see the scetch before giving my final comments as well. She haven't been online though, darn it xD.

Commission declined.

We're very sorry, Troiy feels there's incompatibility in his style and customer's preferences. Pushing the commission would only result in customer dissatisfaction and waste of time for the artist.

This thread is now closed.